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KissMeKate
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Registered: 05/06/08
Posts: 11
Location: The Humboldt Nation, California United States
 
Demon Killer - unexpected lyrics free to good home
Monday, June 16 2008 @ 09:57 PM CDT

Ironically, my first foray at writing lyrics since joining Macjams (and in God knows now many years) have turned out to probably be a better fit for hard rock/metal, which is not a genre I usually work with as a singer, and not really suited for Kassia's musical approach either. Feel free to prove us wrong or run with it in whatever direction floats your boat.

My inspiration was a rather dark and disturbing story from this area that was in the national news yesterday.

http://blogs.usatoday.com/ondeadline/2008/06/police-id-fathe.html

Anyway, this is what came to mind after reflecting on the story for a while this evening. It was the only thing that kept coming back into my mind after repeated attempts to think of something else. So eventually I just went with it.

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Demon Killer

First let me tell you that I ain't all right
Just to tell the truth for once in my life

The demons behind me no matter where I turn
I can't find a place to hide from the burn

But now it don't matter
The last darkness has come
A life ripped and tattered
And a shot from a gun
I say now it don't matter
Whatever I've done
Whatever I've scattered
What I have become

So now let me tell you that I don't give a damn
What you think is held in the heart of a man

When they drive by me they'll see what they see
'Takes one to know one', the devil said to me

But now it don't matter
The last darkness has come
A life ripped and tattered
And a shot from a gun
I say now it don't matter
Whatever I've done
Whatever I've scattered
What I have become

Follow your bliss.
KissMeKate
Forum Newbie


Registered: 05/06/08
Posts: 11
Location: The Humboldt Nation, California United States
 
Re:Demon Killer - unexpected lyrics free to good home
Tuesday, June 17 2008 @ 12:00 PM CDT

A revision after trimming some filler-word fat, that might offer some different phrasing:

Demon Killer

First let me tell you that I ain't alright
Just to tell the truth for once in my life

Demons behind me no matter where I turn
Can't find a place to hide from the burn

But now it don't matter
Last darkness has come
A life ripped and tattered
And a shot from a gun
I say now it don't matter
Whatever I've done
Whatever I've scattered
What I have become

Now let me tell you that I don't give a damn
What you think is held in the heart of a man

When they drive by me, they'll see what they see
'Takes one to know one', the devil said to me

Now it don't matter
Last darkness has come
A life ripped and tattered
And a shot from a gun
I say now it don't matter
Whatever I've done
Whatever I've scattered
What I have become

Follow your bliss.
 
Skean
Forum Full Member


Registered: 03/20/08
Posts: 1440
Location: MacJams, City
 
Re:Demon Killer - unexpected lyrics free to good home
Wednesday, June 18 2008 @ 03:32 PM CDT

Cool lyrics like it... I hope some one make a shot at it Big Grin

I Almost Always Try to Think Positive Thoughts.