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family dealing with addiction
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Lyrics
looking for ray
just a little ray
she’s got aproblem
I can’t help
where’s ray

she was young lovely
now she’s made up
second hand
what’s the probelm
i can’t help
ican’t help
where’s ray
oh where’s ray

I cant help
i cant help you
and me too
ican,t hep you and me too
i cant get you
i cant be you

i say
come on pack your bags
your coming home

and the drama and the nightlifes
got you by the troat
and your going down
your gonna drown
your gonna drown
the ships going down


give them the life
we never had
no lies
no surprise
im disappointed
and i,m bitter
im done with the lies
it was always me and you
i could always help you

looking for ray just a little ray
Song Stats
Hits: 2273
Comments: 19
Fans: 7
Plays: 388
Downloads: 117
Votes: 16
Uploaded: May 14, 2005 - 06:51:30 AM
Last Updated: May 13, 2005 - 10:35:04 PM Last Played: Nov 03, 2009 - 12:01:42 PM
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Comments
aclarke said 1656 days ago (May 14th, 2005)
Tough Subject Matter
Excellent job getting that feeling of quiet desperation to
pull through without getting too dramatic. Offbeat
harmonies are very well suited to this song.

Production wise there is some "white noise" coming from
the vocal track- I'm pretty sure that could be reduced
somewhat through production but I'm probably not the
best person to give you specifics on how this could be
accomplished.

Again, very nice job.
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eltopo said 1655 days ago (May 15th, 2005)
Loved this
Really stark, simple and effective.

I even liked the white noise.
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eltopo said 1655 days ago (May 15th, 2005)
Loved this
Really stark, simple and effective.

I even liked the white noise.
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eltopo said 1655 days ago (May 15th, 2005)
Loved this
Really stark, simple and effective.

I even liked the white noise.
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Emily Rohm said 1654 days ago (May 16th, 2005)
There's a chorus of you!
The multiple vocal tracks seemed strange at first, but it
really grew on me. It fit with the nature of the song. I
really like the the line "I can't help you and me too." Good
song.
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_nderscore said 1647 days ago (May 22nd, 2005)
wonderful
nice job at conveying the feelings of sadness & helpless
emotion. that bit of waver in your voice works wonderfully
here. i really enjoy your unique sound & compositions
DL'd
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thetiler said 1647 days ago (May 23rd, 2005)
this cool
nice tune

The female voice is really unique, and cool.

I really like this whole tune.

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Peter Greenstone said 1647 days ago (May 23rd, 2005)
moving
I really like this new one. You keep it so simple but so
moving. The way you phrase the lines is subtly dramatic.
Your voice is a strange delight, haunting in this context.
Downloaded.
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bigwhig said 1637 days ago (June 1st, 2005)
Wow..very nice
I'm pretty picky and don't like to say anything if I really don't
dig it....and this I dig.. reminds me of Air and a little of
Broken Social Scene. IMO it's difficult for a females voice to
be original sounding and you shrugged off convention with
the way you layered and phrased your voice. Very nice
indeed.
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elppa cam said 1625 days ago (June 14th, 2005)
Wow...
Just found this one. Really cool stuff. (A bit eerie for us
who've been through this.)
I have to agree that the vocals at first threw me off and
then... I just got it.

Good job.
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TobinMueller said 1623 days ago (June 16th, 2005)
Vulnerability
The vulnerability in the vocals is what sells me on this
track. Tears at you. And the constant questioning and
helplessness. Wo.
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country john said 1613 days ago (June 26th, 2005)
sister ray
i like it . . .

your voice has a kinda discordant feel to it . . .

don't take this the wrong way . . .

( . . . that's not a bad thing ! )

i just feel the guitar sound is too crisp and clean . . .

chuck a few bum notes and damped strings in . . .

. . . and i think it'll work better

. . . nice one

cj
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said 1606 days ago (July 3rd, 2005)
Its nice...
just to cry sometimes! Thats exactly what i did while
listening to this. Thanks for sharing. I think somewhere
you were kind of slamming on your voice. I don't see why?
I love it! You have a distinctive sound. Keep up the good
work, and congrats on your accomplishments with
ADDICT!
breezer said 1581 days ago (July 27th, 2005)
Great Song.
I love the vox. I can imagine this song even heavier. A late 80's heavy metal sound maybe! Just a thought. :)
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HGB said 1579 days ago (July 30th, 2005)
Original
you_definately_have_your_own_vocal_style.I_like_it._Lyrics_are_different._Very_original,_you_are._talking_like_yoda,_I_am.
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Poor Atlas said 1577 days ago (August 1st, 2005)
Vocals
Multiple vocals work really well - such a strange effect - one
minute I'm outside of the situation and the next I'm right
there in the middle of it
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lot249 said 1498 days ago (October 18th, 2005)
I agree with affective
You have a wonderful thing going with these and when you throw
something in desperate, I'm inspired to
wonder

very
nice
Thew
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billl said 1490 days ago (October 27th, 2005)
great lyrics
voice is great.
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said 511 days ago (July 2nd, 2008)
Addict
I luuuuuve this and I love your lyrics the music and your vocals sound really cool too.
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