Very nice bit of songwriting. It's got a good chord
structure, and the louder guitar works very well with
it. I can't hear anything wrong with your voice, other
than that I have to stick my head in the speaker to
hear it. Can I persuade you to try it a bit higher in the
mix? I think your voice may be better than you give
it credit for.

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Thanks for the kind comment about the voice, it was very encouraging. I was
very conscious that as I haven't sung in years my voice was not as good as could
be- that's why it's so far down in the mix and almost disappears in the chorus.
I'll do some singing practice that way may be I might be more happy with the
vocals on my next song.

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I really like the tune, playing and I think your vocals do
sound fine alright. I do think you should centre the vocals
in the mix and increase them a bit more volume wise. I
did find the loud guitar stuff a bit overbearing in the mix,
although they are played well enough. The song seems to
cut off before the end though!
S

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Thanks for the advice I'll make sure I follow it if I do anything similar!

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The vocals are very low and seem to come at you from the
right.

Could be a really good track with the right production.

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Both you and stevel made the point that the vocals on the right sounds odd. I
reopened the file in GB and centred the vocals which does sound much better.
Mac Jams works well as a solid, if very public, sounding board.

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You've definately got the guitar down. Sound good, but I'd
lose the heavy vocal effect and bring up the vocals. You've
got some good lyrics so let us hear them.

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