You have a lovely voice, and the harmonies are really
nicely done. It would be nice to hear the vocals a little
higher in the mix ... you definitely have a voice that's
worth showing off!

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You sound just like a profession


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No i'm not famous, but thanks for the comment. I've always wanted to write my
own original songs and make my own music to accompany them. I don't know
what I would of done without Garageband.
So this is my first complete song that i've written lyrics and music for.
I appreciate you taking the time to comment!

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You should post more songs with your singing. I guess this
is the song you were working on when you posted to the
forum about the problems you were having recording vocals?
Have you resolved everything or did you find a way to work
around the problem? (It seems like you did by this song.)

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Thanks mungo.
I appreciate the comments. Yes i did work out the problems, most
of them were because my mic lead was cheap and not good quality, but
i also had the gain up way too much. But i've got a quality lead now and it's all
working fine. I'm trying to put out more vocal stuff but sometimes it takes a long
time to put together and edit right.

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But I'm glad I did.

It's a beautiful song, and very well done!
You have a lovely, soothing voice very suited for this style of music--I
hope to hear more from you here!
I would really like to hear this song remixed, bringing your vocals
forward a bit more. Right now they sound 'backstage' in comparison to
the rest of the instrumentation.
Hopefully you'll pursue perfecting this song--it's worthy of the fine-
tuning, and I could see it played on Christian stations, or on a CD.

Beautiful! :)


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Thanks for the comment mystified! I know what you mean about bringing the
vocals more out to the front,when i listen to it now. Sometimes i don't pick up
on things when i hear the song so many times making it. I'll try to do that more
as i continue on. Thanks again.

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for contemporary praise music - and this is your first true song effort? Wow, you're doin' fantastic. I'll echo what the others have said here and, a quirky note - the applause at the beginning actually sounds really good - but at the end of the song, no audience. It unintentionally gives the effect that the adoring crowd has nipped outside for a stretch, which they would be foolish to do, since they'd have missed a great performance. Well done!

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Thanks dreadmon.
I liked the audience effect, but i can see how it would've been better at the end
also.

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You go, sis girl! :-) Lovely voice, sweet arrangement, great lyrics.
You've got another fan. :-)

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