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A song about people who can't commit
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| Peter Greenstone said 1611 days ago (June 27th, 2005) | |
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A lot of potential I think you have a great concept here and I really like your singing. You have a great voice. I think though that this sounds like a rough sketch of what it could be if you were to develope the arrangement more, fill it out and add more to it. A real electric guitar would sound a lot better than the midi one (If you don't play guitar maybe someone can play the part for you based on what you wrote). The acoustics of your vocal track sound like either you were far from the mic in a small room or that you used reverb effects that pushed them back. I like the melodies and the lyrics and your singing a lot, but I think this could be filled out and refined a lot more to meet it's potential. I hope my comments help. This sounds like a song worth taking to the next level. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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electric piano is beautiful!
How to choose the sound is unique%uFF01
I like this namber!