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| spruce said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Very pro.... Thanks for the positive comment, NoData - and it's my very first one, too! Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| Shimky said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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There's Nothing To Be Afraid Of! Liar! Liar! You won't ensnare us!!! ;O) Great first track, Spruce! A catchy little number. Good music and interesting which really get the listener thinking about things. The tracks starts well, has a good middle and ends well, but something's missing... Keep everything you've already got and try adding a middle section to it which sounds quite different from the rest of the song (but still fits the style of the song) and contains some different lyrics in this new section. This would break up the song and make it more interesting for the listener. At the moment, it's a little too samey all the way through, although I can hear that you are making subtle changes all the way through and they work well. I'm another newbie, so please check out my only effort to date and let me know how I could improve it. Looking forward to the next one! :O) Check out my latest song called Funeral
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| Shimky said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Interesting Lyrics ...I meant to say! :O) Check out my latest song called Funeral
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| spruce said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Interesting Lyrics Thanks for the good advice! There are some different samples that I could use in a break - just need to make it sound similar.... watch out for a remix. Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| ben_mids said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Catchy! Wanted to listen to this over and over...it's original and nicely put together. An excellent first GB attempt! The lyrics are cool, but I'm sure there are a few fuddy-duddies that won't like them...but what the hell! |
| spruce said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Catchy! Thanks Ben! I'm glad you like it! (have I seen you somewhere before?) Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| Madam H said 1623 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Catchy! Ben, I couldn't agree more. You're right on target. And adorable. --- Won't my pen mark up the monitor when I sign? |
| stevel said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Interesting mix of sounds and vocals Yes this is an interesting little track, just as i was thinking 'I wish the track was louder' it came crashing in about halfway through. I like those vocal samples you use. If this is your first attempt at GB then it is an accomplished one! S Check out my latest song called Electricity
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| spruce said 1624 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Interesting mix of sounds and vocals Thanks - I really appreciate the constructive feedback. The introduction is a bit long - I was having too much fun messing around! Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| Madam H said 1623 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Fantastic! What a great song! Very creative and catchy. I hope there are more to come! |
| SlimGirlFat said 1623 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Cool! Love the vox and effects. For a first track this is very good, tight production and arrangement, I do think it could get some variation in there, esp on the beats. Very Gary Numan sound. but I like it. Cool one. lets have more then!!! SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| spruce said 1623 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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Cool! Thanks for the feedback - I agree that the beat needs the most work. I've been working on a new little thing all day - what a great way to spend a bank holiday... Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| Liliwood said 1623 days ago (May 30th, 2005) | |
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welcome.. now you have to do more..lol welcome... coo; dance groov.. now you strated.. you have to make more..no stopping now... you will become an GB addict... woodguy32 Check out my latest song called "Blue Witch" Lilichi-Woodguy32
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| Joanna said 1623 days ago (May 31st, 2005) | |
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Love the samples The old movie samples really make this song sparkle for me. Some great lines with dramatic reads. Check out my latest song called Nellie G.
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| bent said 1621 days ago (June 1st, 2005) | |
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Actually ... this is one of the better that ... ... I have heard here on MacJams. A real talent there Spruce. Keep up the good work! |
| basil81 said 1618 days ago (June 5th, 2005) | |
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Well done! This is awsome for your first GB experience. It sounds as though you have quite a knack for production, cause it's quite well done I must say. MY first song, which I never posted....anywhere EVER...wasn't even close to this one. Congrats, and keep 'em coming!! Check out my latest song called Score This Draft 1
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| _nderscore said 1617 days ago (June 5th, 2005) | |
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top notch great sounds & FX. the production on this is just about perfect. the front end drags a little, but kicks in nicely. i would like to hear it end on some faster notes. great tune Check out my latest song called glyd
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| Swanny said 1617 days ago (June 5th, 2005) | |
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Cool Song Spruce ! Very catchy ! Check out my latest song called Chillin
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| Macaudion said 1616 days ago (June 6th, 2005) | |
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Nice 1st, 2nd or 10th effort... Can't believe this is a first attempt. This means that you will have great stuff to look forward to. Again, you lifted my energy level up another positive notch. Two songs two sexual events - You're makin me look good... I'm still listening and I really like this...Great job! Cydniko Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU
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| spruce said 1616 days ago (June 6th, 2005) | |
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Nice 1st, 2nd or 10th effort... Thanks for another very appreciated comment - It is honestly my first attempt with GarageBand. I have a keyboard (Yamaha CS1X) and a little sequencer that I've had for years, but I've never used a software sequencer/synth. I swear I'm not trying to score some extra points! Check out my latest song called Bring me the head of disco!
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| Char said 204 days ago (April 18th, 2009) | |
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Be proud of yourself. The second version is more complex. Both are good. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Do Any Thing
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I was very intrigued by the lyrics. Nice production. Very hip
and cool. Excellent job!