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| fosod said 2066 days ago (March 31st, 2004) | |
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A Little A little Elvis Costello, a little Steve Winwood. Could use some refinement lyrically and vocally, but you've got a great start. ---Kind regards, TT -- www.fosod.com Check out my latest song called Totally Hoany
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| Anonymous said 2066 days ago (March 31st, 2004) | |
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Wow First of all, you have an amazing voice and the ability to communicate a song. Wow. I like the song a lot in general, but I did feel maybe it lost a little energy in what might be called the bridge section. (I would have to listen to it again to be sure.) Still, as I said previously: Wow. |
| XVERION said 2066 days ago (March 31st, 2004) | |
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Thanks Thanks for the comments. Fosod, I went back and listened to the song again, I do hear Elvis Costello in there. It surprised me! Again thanks! Check out my latest song called The Weekday Nightly Ritual-Us(short version)
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| daphna said 2063 days ago (April 3rd, 2004) | |
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enjoyed your song Catchy chorus, clever song title and nice vocals. As a bit of constructive criticism, I agree with another post about the bridge, that it lost some of the song's energy, and I think that is because the song, as a whole, stayed in C major for too long. A bridge should ideally be a break away point to really change the pace and feel, and so when you get back to the chorus, it should feel like you've been somewhere, and the chorus feels fresh again. That said, your song is one of the better ones on MacJam to be sure. I think you have a really good singing voice and if you're interested in my song, (and I'm posting more soon) you're welcome to sing them for me! Check out my latest song called I Love My Mac mjrf
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| TobinMueller said 2014 days ago (May 21st, 2004) | |
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Great vocals I wish you would post your lyrics. Your vocal sound is fantastic. Your vocals drive this piece, reaching past the soft piano slippery cymbal crashes. Costello and Winwood, yes, and Gabriel too. Goodness. But the piano is so soft, the mix could be more balanced and the drumming could be better integrated. Yet. Wow, I really hope you do more singing. You've got whatever it is souls are waiting to hear. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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kevin_stone
Love the sparce feel of the music which accentuates your great voice, I like the story feel of the vocal line.