Great cavernous sound you've got on this one...very nice
guitar work
S

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Very cool sound...nice playing of guitar/piano. I like
how it's mellow and still moves.





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Love the tube sound you get on the intro lead guitar. Nice
articulations, guitar performance, nice build. The track
has a music bed feel, like it is waiting for vocals; not quite
enough going on in my ears to make it sound completed.
but I love the power you get from your guitars, the energy
and potential the track conveys. Maybe an MJ singer can
help make this into a power ballad. The ending is rather
sudden; consider ending on the tonic, or fading out with
the solo, instead of returning to the chord progression
and just ending it there.

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awesome guitar... what a great track.
Nice big fat sound coming out through my speakers.. good
production here.
I agree with Tobins comments that some vocals would be
great over this.
ending is a little too quick for my liking, but great track
anyhow..
SlimGirlFat


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Really big expansive, airy sound, which really builds on
this track.

Another top effort

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chord progression. Well mixed. Where are the vocals?
thanks for sharing.

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You may wat to extend the ending, perhaps letting the keys
take on the lead voice for a more contemplative feel, then a
big rousing return of guitar for the very end.

Good sound, good playing, I enjoyed this.

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This is such a wonderful base for vocals. It's got a lot of
depth and power. A good rock singer on top would be
really cool. (note: I'm biased and love vocals) Regardless,
you've done a great job with this song.

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Like the wall-of-sound feeling. Great room for playing with verse structure, breaks etc. And vocals...aaahhhh... ;o)

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