Catchy
This is a great pop song - v hooky and catchy. Well done. The only thing I think that stops it being super great is the backing vocals. They seem to be a little overpowering and a little forward in the mix. Otherwise - well done!!
Excellent
Wow. Really great song. You have a fantastic singing voice.
I love the way you arranged this and how it builds. The
drums are perfect. Excellent, catchy structure and really nice
lyrics. Everything is top notch except for the mix. It sounds
like I'm hearing it through a small cheap radio, particularly
regarding the vocal tracks. The guitars sound good and full
but overall things sounds tinny. I'm sure you could get a
much better mix out of what you have. I'm glad I heard this
one.
repeat...repeat...repeat
...and now my cd-player is broken!! But it does'nt matter cuz
this was awesome!!!!! I got the feeling that this was very All
American Rejects, which is a plus in my book...I wish I could
sing like that.....keep on postin more stuff............*tinkering
with the cd-player...*
TobinMueller said 1432 days ago (August 3rd, 2005)
Gets better and better
Really nice. I'm sorry I missed this when it was first posted.
A very well written song, with nice progression and emotion.
Your voice is perfect for this genre. The whole pacing and
feel is really good. Even tho you have a done a great job
filling out the mix, the track has a demo feel, since your
vocals are a bit removed and roomy sounding, and the
drums aren't always in the same space as the rest of the
tracks; but it is a GREAT demo. As the track builds it gets
better and better, a very important attribute, especially for a
song that starts off good to begin with.
Thank you, Let's Hear More!
My friend and I have been browsing the emo and hardcore
categories here, as that's the music that we listen to. I
would jus like to say thank you for an actual emo song!
Other people labelled their songs as "Emo," and left me
utterly dissapointed, because they are absolutely not
emo... at all. So thanks guys! It's good to know that there
are some other people who actually listen to emo/make
emo music (or as my friend would say, "People who
actually know their shit from their oatmeal.") Good song,
by the way! I loved it. The harmonies are spot-on, and the
guitar riff is catchy. I like the keyboard, it sets it apart
from the typical emo song. Let's hear some more!
Edits
O the passion, nice drum work. pretty pro sounding for
MP3, a few edits and transitions could really rev it up. And
a quick snappy beat under chours.
mindscaper said 1392 days ago (September 11th, 2005)
yo
very well done song. course its hard not to make one when
you have intense inspiration like that. vocals are awesome.
chorus rocks. go get yourself signed. i tip my hat to ya :P
KineticBends said 1384 days ago (September 20th, 2005)
well
good job man, i think that hard times can always bring about
good music, however if it was be i would have stayed with
that acoustic riff u had going on, instead of selling out, to
the pop punk
bnut thats just me
.goodjob
Great stuff
Dude, this is great. My only complaint is the production, that's it. Otherwise this is a great track, great Pop potential, great lyrics and subject matter. Mtv ready for sure.
loved it
my regards concerning the subject matter, but you express the
emotion in a powerful way. The vocals are stellar, especially the way
you put them together with the backing vocals. Really excellent song
writing, from the way it builds to that little synth line at the end. just
great stuff
The_One_Alone said 502 days ago (February 18th, 2008)
Good
I didn't care much for the beginning guitar, but all the rest was excellent. everything fitted together perfectly and it was full and no empty spaces. vocals sounded great and perfect for this song.
Myshkin
This is a great pop song - v hooky and catchy. Well done. The only thing I think that stops it being super great is the backing vocals. They seem to be a little overpowering and a little forward in the mix. Otherwise - well done!!
Peter Greenstone
Wow. Really great song. You have a fantastic singing voice.
I love the way you arranged this and how it builds. The
drums are perfect. Excellent, catchy structure and really nice
lyrics. Everything is top notch except for the mix. It sounds
like I'm hearing it through a small cheap radio, particularly
regarding the vocal tracks. The guitars sound good and full
but overall things sounds tinny. I'm sure you could get a
much better mix out of what you have. I'm glad I heard this
one.
kingkongcaos
...and now my cd-player is broken!! But it does'nt matter cuz
this was awesome!!!!! I got the feeling that this was very All
American Rejects, which is a plus in my book...I wish I could
sing like that.....keep on postin more stuff............*tinkering
with the cd-player...*
DOS
This Tracks rocks Dude! Keep it up:D if you wanna make a song contact me at godman900@hotmail.com
DOS
TobinMueller
Really nice. I'm sorry I missed this when it was first posted.
A very well written song, with nice progression and emotion.
Your voice is perfect for this genre. The whole pacing and
feel is really good. Even tho you have a done a great job
filling out the mix, the track has a demo feel, since your
vocals are a bit removed and roomy sounding, and the
drums aren't always in the same space as the rest of the
tracks; but it is a GREAT demo. As the track builds it gets
better and better, a very important attribute, especially for a
song that starts off good to begin with.
aclarke
Tobin pointed this out. Very well crafted song, excellent
performance. Personally I don't care if it's not a perfect
mix. It's a damn fine tune.
Hope you stick around and post more tunage here!
EdensEve
Yes, I saw this in the Share A Song thread, Tobin's post. Very
good! I hope you post more. I am already a fan! Please do....
gkeller
My friend and I have been browsing the emo and hardcore
categories here, as that's the music that we listen to. I
would jus like to say thank you for an actual emo song!
Other people labelled their songs as "Emo," and left me
utterly dissapointed, because they are absolutely not
emo... at all. So thanks guys! It's good to know that there
are some other people who actually listen to emo/make
emo music (or as my friend would say, "People who
actually know their shit from their oatmeal.") Good song,
by the way! I loved it. The harmonies are spot-on, and the
guitar riff is catchy. I like the keyboard, it sets it apart
from the typical emo song. Let's hear some more!
Great track and very touching! Sorry about your loss!
cormacbrenock
I love that mono synth in the background.
You really have that vocal thing to perfection.
Punchy , and great engineering .
Well done .
Brilliant .
Einarus
A solid pop song! Sounds very pro, except the overall
sound is somewhat hollow.
Love the build-up and the singing is great!
Good one!
DD SOT
O the passion, nice drum work. pretty pro sounding for
MP3, a few edits and transitions could really rev it up. And
a quick snappy beat under chours.
what you track this on?
mindscaper
very well done song. course its hard not to make one when
you have intense inspiration like that. vocals are awesome.
chorus rocks. go get yourself signed. i tip my hat to ya :P
KineticBends
good job man, i think that hard times can always bring about
good music, however if it was be i would have stayed with
that acoustic riff u had going on, instead of selling out, to
the pop punk
bnut thats just me
.goodjob
SpasmodicMan
Man, you gotta share more. Great shit. I mean great hit.
nice song! it reminds me a bit of dashboard!
EuroFever
I just love this song!!!!
Eurofever
basil81
Dude, this is great. My only complaint is the production, that's it. Otherwise this is a great track, great Pop potential, great lyrics and subject matter. Mtv ready for sure.
Sea Monk Seven
*sniff* *sniff*
....................
yours truly,
sea monk seven
Souljah1119
Very nice... I got goosebumps listening to this one.
ktb
my regards concerning the subject matter, but you express the
emotion in a powerful way. The vocals are stellar, especially the way
you put them together with the backing vocals. Really excellent song
writing, from the way it builds to that little synth line at the end. just
great stuff
Pete_NB
Love that acoustic guitar sound and the way this song builds. Perfect pace in how it builds until the very end.
GeorgeLikesMusic
I love this song! The guitar sounds amazing, you're a great singer, the background vox, amazing really catchy
The_One_Alone
I didn't care much for the beginning guitar, but all the rest was excellent. everything fitted together perfectly and it was full and no empty spaces. vocals sounded great and perfect for this song.
screamalexz
like your vocals on this track. i think having so many vocal tracks makes it a tad distracting. i like the passion in the song.
now THIS is the kind of music I like. awesome. sorry for your loss buddy.