Really unusual! The guitar work is nice among all those
unusual chords. This feels like watching the world spin
past while sitting inside a bizzare magical clock. Very
creative... really a very interesting song.

The mix could be a bit more balanced. There are a few
bits sticking out and some others that disappear. The
chime strikes are a little piercing. You might consider
cutting some of the high end EQ on that track to smooth
them out a bit. (7-7-8-6)

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You're right, it does sound like a clock.
There's a banjo on this that I'd forgotten to include in the track info, and one of the strings was buzzing because something had fallen off it. I don't know if that accounts for the offending sounds.
One of these days I'll have another go. Meanwhile i'm grateful for the positive and helpful feedback.

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