...tune, catchy and very moving. Great vocal performance.



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nice vocal. thanks for sharing.

- Hawks

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Nice tune, like your style here. In so many parts you have
some incredible melodies. Your voice is really impressive
here one of the best ive heard here. To be honest I was
going to give very high scores then it got a bit out of
speed.

A tune this good really should keep that thang you had
going in tbe beginning and toward the middle. The
slowness in places got me out of that incredible melodiy
grove you had going.
This tune has great, great potiental. But I feel when you
made it slow down and put in extra parts, it interupted the
great melodic beauty you truly had going for it.

I might have a tendency to do that myself, have a killer
tune but sometimes I like to throw in the kitchen sink and
it gets wighted down and then I loose the original beauty.

Just my thought, I only write stuff like this when I like the
tune, which I think you have a great potiental here.

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Are you talking about the bridge? I know I do have a tendency to add a bridge in every song I write whether it needs it or not. This was my first serious attempt to record something in Garageband and I'm not overly happy with the final mix but I've heard it so many times now, I don't want to play with it any more...

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You said, "Well, never mind. We may be ugly, but we have the music"

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You wrote this, that's great.
I like your style. Great voice too, particularly suitable with harmonies i
would think.

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