Holding Me Down

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obbster

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This is a song I recently wrote. Its been a while since I uploaded a song onto Macjams so I hope you all like this one. Its a soft rock ballad, not dissimilar to other songs ive uploaded.

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Lyrics

holding me down
face on the ground
trying to love

feelin so blue
how i found you, and lost you
and noones around

Chorus:

trying so hard to reach you
not trying too hard too teach you
and our love....
is over.....
its over, cant go on any more

verse 2:

raining down
threw my stuff around
i have to leave

taking back,
all the crap and the shit we said
hold me one last time

Song Stats

Hits: 1273
Comments: 12
Fans: 1
Plays: 157
Downloads: 74
Votes: 11
Uploaded: Jun 28, 2005 - 09:27:22 PM
Last Updated: Jun 28, 2005 - 06:32:25 PM Last Played: Jul 19, 2009 - 10:22:32 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

PowerMac G4 1ghz, 768Mb Ram, Keystation 49e.

Software:

Garageband 2.01

Comments

Einarus	Einarus said 1607 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
	Nice Very sweet. Good vocals and nice lyrics. Good job! Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

Jim Bouchard	Jim Bouchard said 1607 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
	great song I really like this. The singing is really great. I felt like it maybe could build up a bit more with additional harmonies on the chorus, and my tendency is to think that a real guitar part could enrich this a lot. Check out my latest song called Weather or Not w/awigze

said 1606 days ago (June 29th, 2005)

Liam, glad to see you're posting again!
Great textures in your instrument selection. The vocals
really sound good, especially when the harmonies kick in.
I agree with Jim, more harmonies! The vocals could be
brought up a bit, though. The change up, in the middle
(with guita)r, is a nice touch. Effective solo! The ensemble
of instruments just seems to build and build.

Excellent job... and that subtle ending!

fairy beth	fairy beth said 1606 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
	comment now dont get annoyed, but your voice reminds me abit of darren hayes. this is a good thing tho - i promise. cos as cheesy as he is, he does have a damn good voice. love the harmonies, spot on. nice song obbster. Check out my latest song called Message No.1 - David Gwynne

DeputyDoofy	DeputyDoofy said 1606 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
	Very nice. I'm not always a fan of ballads, however, this tune is quite good. 8-7-8-8 Check out my latest song called Sweet Smell Of Success

aclarke	aclarke said 1606 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
	Gettin' better with each submission. Obbster- you've got a fantastic voice and it's improving everytime you bring us new tunage. This song almost comes off as a prog rock power ballad.... okay, so we make a new genre... heheh. Solo was cool but as Jim Bouchard said it would be totally kickass with some real strings. Nice job! Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki

Tadashi Togawa	Tadashi Togawa said 1606 days ago (June 30th, 2005)
	simple and wonderful Your song is very simple and wonderful. The melody is quiet. It is a gentle voice. Check out my latest song called Mexican taste

	said 1606 days ago (June 30th, 2005)
	Great song layout Another Obbster crysong. I like it. This has a sweeping, broad feeling...almost majestic, despite its intimate, pain- soaked message. Your voice is a good listen...with or without flanking harmonies. Just a few flat notes (on the highest ascents) that can be polished up with practice. You effortlessly glide from chest to head voice. Do more!

obbster	obbster said 1605 days ago (June 30th, 2005)
	Great song layout Thanks for your comments. Ive been workin on a few other songs and will upload soon. --- I Start everyday, with a Dickens Cider! Check out my latest song called Legend

stevel	stevel said 1605 days ago (June 30th, 2005)
	Great vocals Good song, really like all the vocal harmonies you have on this one. A really nice production. Normally the phrase 'power ballad' has me running for shelter but this has a kind of innocence to it that is refreshing S Check out my latest song called Electricity

_nderscore	_nderscore said 1599 days ago (July 6th, 2005)
	obbster! this rocks, man. if the girls don't fall for this one, forget 'em. really.. nice job all-around Check out my latest song called glyd

TobinMueller	TobinMueller said 1578 days ago (July 28th, 2005)
	Very compelling Something very compelling, emotionally enrapturing about this anthem-like ballad. Really nice, even thru all the mix level things my ear wants to change, the progression is so strong and classic, reaches inside, and the vocal layering (especially the higher voice) is very affecting. Nice track. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

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Artist Info

Name: Liam

25 years old. Specialise in Progressive/Ambient styles... and some rock ballads.... [see more]

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