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A new song that's not finished but I wanted feedback.
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| saulteen said 1596 days ago (July 14th, 2005) | |
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very NIN Thank you for your kind words of praise. That beat is from the Jam Pack 2 (I think the name of the guy is Dell, which may be Deltron3030 but I'm not sure). I want to come in more aggressivly but i'm not sure if it should be in the beat or the vocals. I'm thinking both but whatever. Well I'll post the next draft in a couple of days so I'll drop you a line when I do. Check out my latest song called dark will not collide demo
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| mandolinquent said 1597 days ago (July 14th, 2005) | |
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Nice... I very much like the rise into the chorus... it really gives the song a lift. Do you return to the minor key section after? Can't make out the words at all, but that sounds like you're using them as much as texture as muich as anything. I'd guess that you could play with the levels a little more... It's very fresh though... Check out my latest song called Had We But World Enough
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| saulteen said 1596 days ago (July 14th, 2005) | |
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Nice... I glad you dig it. The vocals suck cause I'm using a headset mic from my playstation 2. I'm looking to get a usb condensor mic but I haven't checked any reviews on them. I think I'm going to mix most of it while I master after I insert new vox. Check back or I'll holla to ya. Check out my latest song called dark will not collide demo
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| K.I.S.KISMET said 1597 days ago (July 14th, 2005) | |
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Great beginning! Dead on timing, great beat, vocal effects and melody are infectuous. I would have liked to have heard the vocals and beats brought up a tad in the mix, (maybe) the synths down a tad. And please, make it longer.... you've just teased my appetite. I'm eager to hear it finished! Check out my latest song called Your's
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| Slotogenic said 1596 days ago (July 14th, 2005) | |
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A Great start I love the synth sounds you got going on there. Sounds like lots of square waves. I kind of like the abrupt stop. Maybe come in after a few seconds full throttle. Just a thought. I'm interested to see how it turns out. I won't rate it till I hear the finshed product though. |
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i like the main beat a lot, where did you get it?
sounds like a very nice work in progress.
I think it needs to come back around again, but get a little more aggressive when the first segment comes back in.