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A song composed over a beautiful urdu poem by a friend...
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| suraj said 1588 days ago (July 17th, 2005) | |
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Thanks! Thank you so Much! for such a nice welcome! It's so nice to be part of this community. This Song is a 'typically' Romantic Urdu Poem written by a friend. It's about a lover's description of "love intoxication" and enjoying a journey together and forgetting about destinations.... Thanks for the suggestion, I make this mistake quite often; You might find it in some more posts... But I'll take special care and pay attention to my sound engineering as well. I used Cubase and Processed my Guitar and voice with simple reverb. Thanks again! Check out my latest song called Soul Incomplete
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| TobinMueller said 1585 days ago (July 21st, 2005) | |
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Very nice tune in there Great tune, nice guitar sound. Nice voice. Wish you could somehow remove the distortions. If they aren't recorded, but occurred in the mix down, consider redoing the mix at lower levels and compressing to alleviate distortion. there are also click in the intro that might by digital distortions from EQ saturation. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| thetiler said 1583 days ago (July 23rd, 2005) | |
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nice vocal Enjoyed the guitar as well. Nice high vocal range! Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| shephie said 1582 days ago (July 23rd, 2005) | |
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Wow..!! Good guitar ...I mean very good..!! And lyrics gives a fresh feeling. I am not too sure if its intentional but your dialect sounds western when you pronounce - suroor / guroor / noor / aur / door / huzoor / hoor. Urdu dignifies your expresssions and prononciation dignifies urdu - this is absolutely my personal opinion. |
| suraj said 1581 days ago (July 25th, 2005) | |
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Wow..!! Thank you! so much! But I think what I'm learning from feedback is that my production needs considerable improvement. The pronunciation is not intentional! I call it Sufi Rock! My apologies if this has in anyway let Urdu down; but I did not mean to. Thanks a lot! Check out my latest song called Soul Incomplete
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| nashu said 1578 days ago (July 28th, 2005) | |
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Good work I believe this sufi-rock-style has potential for trends. Looking forward for some more work from you OR from your band. Do you have one..? |
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Scorpjammer
Great finger picking and singing. I like your melody for this poem. Could you give a brief explanation of the poem? What software did you use? One minor suggestion: You might want to bring up the volume on your vocals. Your voice (level) seems to be hiding behind the guitar. You have a great voice. You might want to showcase it more...It's just a suggestion. I like the sound level and reverb on the guitar. Otherwise, good job for your first post. Welcome to Macjams!