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| mandolinquent said 1590 days ago (July 21st, 2005) | |
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Nice voice... Nicely put-together song too... I agree with Leebo that there is something peculier about the mix; the instrumentation is definately a little muddy, although the bass level seems ok to me; but it's a great start. People wiser than me can usually comment more constructively if you add some recording details... Check out my latest song called Had We But World Enough
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| Ed Hannifin said 1586 days ago (July 25th, 2005) | |
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The songwriting's good... ...and the vocals are solid, although I want some part where you cut loose. I have the sense that you have the chops to give this more dynamics... There is something odd with the mix. Too much compression? Each element is good...in tune and in time... And I find that I want more variation in the drums, less of the middle sizzle on those sizzles...and more meat on the electric guitar... It's like...I know it's in there...this is good stuff...But on my set-up, anyway, it sits inside the speakers a little... Keep messin' with it! Ed Check out my latest song called Next Time Around (w/jiguma)
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| matmuso said 1578 days ago (August 2nd, 2005) | |
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nice tune the mix sounds OK to me, perhaps it depends what you are listening on. like the atmospheric use of the strings and good vocals too. Look forward to hearing some more tunes. |
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Leebo
Quite a nice, innoffensive little tune you've got there,
unfortunately let-down by a pretty bad mix. The whole
thing sounds really flat, as if somebody accidentally set
the mid-range on the graphic to 'zero'. As a result the
bass line is almost non-existent, instruments are hardly
there, and the whole piece sounds really muddy. Too
much top as well.
It's a shame because you have a nice voice! (My suspicion
is that this wasn't done in Garageband - I used to own an
old Fostex 4-Track when I was a teenager, which used to
give pretty similar results.)
Good job on a nice little song though!