about this cause it's not a genre of my expertise (not that
I'm an expert at any genre!), but this seems to be very well
played. I did find the cymbals to be a bit too loud in the
very beginning. (I wanted to hear the guitar more...) And
maybe it's because I'm not listening in headphones, but I
don't hear much bass. I think the song would benefit from
a clearer bassline. Very cool though overall!

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Hi Emily, thanks for the feedback! I've just started using Logic for mastering & am still getting up to speed on it. I'll go back & take a look at the intro... loud cymbals bug me too. Thanks again!

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Nice to see someone with some balls here... who isn't
afraid to crank it up and get a good guitar sound. Overall I
liked the main riff, but I think the song needs some vocals
because otherwise it ends up sounding a little too
repetitive. Nice work though.

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As an instrumental it could use more dynamics. Maybe drop
out the guitars for a bit and just kick it with drums and bass.
Then reintroduce the guitars with slowly building feedback
and harmonics etc. Could be very cool.

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Great feedback, thanks! I'll have to play around with it some more. Thanks
for listening.

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Dosent need any vocals! Its great just like it is, Bass turned up an everythang!

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Thanks Savage!

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