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| nyakki said 1575 days ago (August 2nd, 2005) | |
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Growing Thanks for the comments I'm used to the automatic low ratings I get because something is considered 'looped'. I think I get what you mean about the gaps in the guitar. I'll see what I can add to make it 'fuller'I really like how the two extremely different guitar loops came together at the end. So, what you are saying (I think) is to have more of the ending style and less of the 'gaps' and 'drum solos'--- Need help selecting a MacJams song? Go 'Random' with MacJams Random Song Picker Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| said 1574 days ago (August 4th, 2005) | |
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sounds like some cool game music, old sega style. I am digging the loops and the way they were put together. |
| nyakki said 1574 days ago (August 4th, 2005) | |
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sounds like Thanks for the nice comments--- Need help selecting a MacJams song? Go 'Random' with MacJams Random Song Picker Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| allsaints said 1570 days ago (August 8th, 2005) | |
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no problem I think the piece works just fine. Check out my latest song called Color Permutation Of Composition Two
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| nyakki said 1569 days ago (August 8th, 2005) | |
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no problem Thank you very much.--- Need help selecting a MacJams song? Go 'Random' with MacJams Random Song Picker Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| holyparsnip said 1561 days ago (August 17th, 2005) | |
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Slow and Minimal Wins the race. Thanks for doing something down tempo. I need to work on this more, The composition is really great. This piece is goodness. I like the ending, it all pays off for me. Woo Hoo! Check out my latest song called Democracy Despotism Scale (collab)
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| nyakki said 1561 days ago (August 17th, 2005) | |
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Slow and Minimal Thank you for the nice comments It was fun slowing things down a bit. I set the tempo to 60 and went from there.--- Need help selecting a MacJams song? Go 'Random' with MacJams Random Song Picker Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| andrewr mac said 1535 days ago (September 12th, 2005) | |
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hey i like the empty feeling of your song. reminds me a bit of the clash. Check out my latest song called untitled
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| nyakki said 1534 days ago (September 13th, 2005) | |
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hey Thank you for the comment. It's always nice to be compared to a good music group.--- Need help selecting a MacJams song? Go 'Random' with MacJams Random Song Picker Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| screamalexz said 1413 days ago (January 11th, 2006) | |
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good rhythems the guitar has some good rhythem ideas. i would sugjest that you up the tempo a bit, and add some vocals this type of song is a little lonely with out vocals tho it has a great catchy rhythem that rhythem would really sink the words into your mind making it a track that gets constantly stuck in your head. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| screamalexz said 1413 days ago (January 11th, 2006) | |
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good rhythems the guitar has some good rhythem ideas. i would sugjest that you up the tempo a bit, and add some vocals this type of song is a little lonely with out vocals tho it has a great catchy rhythem that rhythem would really sink the words into your mind making it a track that gets constantly stuck in your head. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| rjamadeus said 1108 days ago (November 12th, 2006) | |
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the ending i liked the song especially how it picks up at the end , i wished the end was longer . Check out my latest song called can't get the blues
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| Heightened said 756 days ago (October 30th, 2007) | |
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Excellent Nice. Real strong beat and guitar sounds. Check out my latest song called A Journey Through Starburst Galaxy M82
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I have to say that I found the gaps between guitar playing
irritating at first but the track worked better as it moved on.
Personally, I'd have less of the opening 2 thirds and more of
the final third (and develop this a little). think you deserve a
better rating than you had when I wrote this (especially
compared to some things I've listened to on MJ but
unfortunately, I can't rate you yet.