Love the voice. Sounds great!

Just a couple of suggestions. I think the bridge could use a little bit more work. Also, the enunciation of "five billion" sounds a bit goofy (especially with the backing vocals near the end), which doesn't seem to match the rest of the song.

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I really like this song's mood.
Thanks for sharring it!

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Very cool lyrics. I wish you would post them. "The beings to
come, can make oil out of us" - I love it. Song has a very nice
feel. Some very nice guitar work. Reminds me a bit of some
of the 60s folk rock like Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young.
Excellent!

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I really dig your lyrics. (Please post them!) Such a good
track. Clear and intimate vocals, tight guitar performance,
nice build; but such good lyrics. Could be a contemporary
folk hit too, since the social commentary lyrics fit well with
that genre. Your vocals on the bridge seem farther away
from the mic than the others, even tho my ears wanted them
louder, not softer (over compressed?) There are other reverb
issues my ears wanted evened out, but the song and
arrangement is so nice It didn't matter. I just wanted to
listened to the song again...

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Wow ... I just passed the place where orchestra came in. I
was about to write that this is very professionally made. Now
I hear the music also have an interesting soul with
disciplined and restrained power under the suface. You must
be a pro, or if not, why aren't you?

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nice title

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Firstly a great track.
I love the lyrics, suitably metaphorical.
I like the way you sing this (some lovely harmonies)
and the guitar playing is wonderful.
I like the electric guitar coming in halfway through.
Very impressive.. D/L
SlimGirlFat

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Fantastic lyrics, first of all!
Good vocals, lovely guitar and clear, very pro production.
Great!

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This song was a pleasant surprise. Lovely sound and great lyrics. Thanks for sharing!

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