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Hits: 1683
Comments: 27
Votes: 25
Plays: 366
Last Played: Sep 19, 2008 - 12:48:50 PM
Downloads: 101
Fans: 8
Uploaded: Aug 18, 2005 - 08:06:17 AM
Last Updated: Aug 19, 2005 - 02:20:50 AM
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Description:
A second try with this song, tried to add new vocals,

Lyrics:
The way you left
gave me the feel of hope
they way you loved
made me feel above
the way you kept it tight
didnt make it right
they way youll miss it hey
now you must go away

I should have know
you would go
going down with you
Makes no Sense

and i know
you would go
going down with you
Makes no Sense


You faked a smile
i thought it would last a while
yoy faked a Life
your attitude and your style
it made me lie
not telling you reasons why
i say goodbye
hoping that you will die

That you will die
makes me cry
because im a lie
that no one knows

And you will die
it makes me cry
because im a lie
that no one knows

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very nice &mdash 08/18/05 - 11:09:53 AM
lovely textures throughout. had kind of a "white album"
feel to me, which is hard to pull off. vocals were well
done & matched perfectly to the music.

thanks for sharing!

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this is great &mdash 08/18/05 - 11:38:54 AM

Ever hear of a band called Eric's Trip?

Norway still kicks for music. Like the soft organ and small
touches in this.

Congratulations!

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My second listen... &mdash 08/18/05 - 08:11:22 PM
This is a really (!) good song. Gosh. The song writing, i.e.
lyrics and how you put this together... is so creative.
I am impressed. Glad I saw your link on chat.

Kudos.. Jack

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Less than half way through... &mdash 08/18/05 - 09:12:18 PM
...I hit the download button. Very nice and moody. Quiet
desparation. The soft vocals throughout make an even
stronger statement that if they got stronger throughout. Nice
touch when the strings and organ (maybe?) come in about
halfway through. Would love to see the lyrics posted.

Very nice.

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Like that folk .. kingston trio almost &mdash 08/18/05 - 10:54:58 PM
I hear traces of slow historic kingston trio almost. Then it
gets a little more contemporary.

Nice

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exit music &mdash 08/18/05 - 11:57:47 PM
love that choral organ sound over the gentle strumming
sounds like radiohead backing you up
nice work


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awesome &mdash 08/19/05 - 02:30:05 AM
this is great! your best yet maybe?

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I always... &mdash 08/19/05 - 05:12:02 AM
...loved the original. This one is even better.
So beautiful.
Fav'ed and DL'ed!

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Brooding &mdash 08/19/05 - 06:06:00 AM
This song seems very brooding with quiet anger - I could
almost imagine Morrissey singing it. Enjoyed the subtle use
of strings over the acoustic guitar - very well paced and I like
the breathy vocals

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Nice one! &mdash 08/19/05 - 09:53:15 AM
Sad song but I like it!
Vote: 8-9-8-9

I.G.M.

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Lennon would have wanted to sing this. &mdash 08/19/05 - 01:01:42 PM
This is a great song.! WOW! It made me think of John
Lennon and late Beatles stuff. Production sounds pretty
good. Is that double tracked vocals. Cool.

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Elliot Smith &mdash 08/19/05 - 03:11:53 PM
and a touch of Iron & Wine. Great and unique vocals. Tender
and touching.

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honest, timeless quality &mdash 08/19/05 - 03:21:22 PM
great songwriting & performances. nice stuff

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Elliot Smith &mdash 08/19/05 - 03:52:19 PM
and a touch of Iron & Wine. Great and unique vocals. Tender
and touching.

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wow &mdash 08/20/05 - 07:13:30 PM
Such a soft, smooth sound. Love the background
instruments - I don't often hear such an nice mix.
Can't find anything here I would change. Download time...

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Like the White Album... &mdash 08/20/05 - 07:27:48 PM
...this grows on me over time. I actually remember being a
little disappointed with the White Album when it came
out...but then I kept coming back to it...and eventually it
became one of my favorite albums of all time...

This is deceptively simple. The vocals are great, and the
doubling has a roughness that works for the feel of the
tune...

The lyrics have an ambiguous, Nick Drake-ish, "do-I-
know-what-this-means-or-don't-I" quality that gets the
mood across in a way that a more straightforward lyric
might not do...

Good job...

Ed


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Nice song writing &mdash 08/21/05 - 09:53:34 AM
Love the lyrics...nice song writing. Dig the double up on
the guitars and the choir later in the song.

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Very Epic &mdash 08/21/05 - 12:52:51 PM
I like the epic granduer of this song. I really love the brige
towards the end of the song that is instrumental. Nice open
air vocals and guitar work. Well done!

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Moody &mdash 08/24/05 - 11:35:15 AM
like they all say, great songwriting. All the nice little touches are handled gently and carefully, making for a perfectly rounded song. The emotional resonance is strong in this song.

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weird &mdash 08/25/05 - 03:43:06 AM
i love the lyrics to this song, strange but true lyrics we all fake a smile sometimes and most people cry when someone dies it is normal it is funny you stating the obvious

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The Drugs Don't Work &mdash 08/25/05 - 04:44:49 PM

A sad, rather depressing song. I liked it!!!! :O)

Is it about drug addiction, I wonder?

It ends rather abruptly (recording wise) which is a (tiny)
shame.


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Nice vibe &mdash 08/25/05 - 04:53:02 PM
It feels like a Pink Floyd vibe going through the song. It's
the type of song you want to lay back and listen to with
headphone. Nice work.-JAC

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the second . . . &mdash 09/03/05 - 05:24:27 PM
. . . song i've listened to now of yours . . .
dude . . .
what can i say ?

i loves it

tidy

cj

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wow &mdash 09/25/05 - 07:36:55 AM
There's something intense about this song. I love the whispering vocal
and the lofi instrumentation. I think this is your best composition to
date, and I've been listening to it a lot. Impressing stuff!

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Smoldering Bitterly &mdash 10/08/05 - 07:41:16 AM
Very melancholy and resentful mood here, which makes me very
happy. :D Again, the unproduced production value adds moodiness to
the tune, and really plays well against the lyrics. I don't know who the
chick was, but damn!

Rebecca

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gan ga in flow wins &mdash 10/13/05 - 06:33:11 AM
nice,back grwend,u r good
man,rellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaax

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Beautiful Darkness &mdash 02/11/06 - 10:28:02 PM
Nice song that soothes the mind and heart while painting dark
emotions.

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