Lament To The Fallen Heroes (Collab: Tom Atwood)

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This is a second song from White Hawks' newest album "Field Of Justice". First part is the song called "Field Of Justice" and the second part of this song is the "Lament To The Fallen Heroes".

And guess what! Wonderful musician Tom Atwood helped me composing this song, especially the last harp and wind part, he added some wind part. Thanks a lot Tom!

I hope you enjoy listening to this song:) God bless to you all!

Special thanks to Tom Atwood (aka: atwood1956)

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Song Stats

Hits: 1223
Comments: 17
Fans: 3
Plays: 162
Downloads: 76
Votes: 11
Uploaded: Aug 20, 2005 - 06:49:56 AM
Last Updated: Aug 20, 2005 - 02:40:11 AM Last Played: Sep 16, 2009 - 11:45:39 AM

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Song Actions

Hardware:

iMac 1.25 GHz PowerPC G4

Software:

Garageband

Comments

Tom Atwood

Tom Atwood said 1558 days ago (August 20th, 2005)

Wonderful melody line
Jem, your progress as a young composer is remarkable. I
am glad to see you branching out from loops to the
keyboard. As you know, I love the melody line you created
in the "Lament." I believe it can be expanded further, that
you can build on it. The first half of this two-part piece,
the "Field of Justice," is pure White Hawks.

Thanks for letting me be a small part of your album.

9-9-9-9

p.s. excellent graphics on the cover art.

Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Wonderful melody line Thanks very much Tom for helping me to compose this song!! I'm glad that you like this song:) again thanks for your help! - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Mystified	Mystified said 1558 days ago (August 20th, 2005)
	Well done! It's great hearing these instrumental pieces from you, Jem. This one is particularly nice where you have contrasted the dynamic, agitated open to the softer and more contemplative ending. Nice additions here, Tom-- excellent collaboration. Thank you for posting this :) Cat Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Well done! Thanks Mysti! For taking time to listen to this song and writing comment. And also thanks for adding this song to your favorite:o)! - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Audiologic	Audiologic said 1558 days ago (August 20th, 2005)
	Sounds great together Your own style is growing on you nicely. I like the brass and harp section in the middle / end. I agree with atwood, it could be added to a little bit, it never really climaxes or anything, but I guess that is your own preference. Great collab. Ben Check out my latest song called Dessert Parade

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Sounds great together Hi Ben! thanks for listening and your kind feedback. I'm working on "Lament To The Fallen Heroes ll" recently and going to post it on MacJams when it's ready:) thanks - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Peter Greenstone	Peter Greenstone said 1558 days ago (August 20th, 2005)
	very nice Sounds really nice. I like the transformation it goes through from militaristic to peaceful. Good job portraying the emotion of the subject matter. Check out my latest song called From Nothing

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	very nice Thank you very much Pgreenstone! - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Moco	Moco said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Very Filmic You have created an excellent atmospheric track here - would be very well suited to a movie or tv show. Well done.

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Very Filmic Thanks Moco! - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Ed Hannifin

Ed Hannifin said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)

Should I wait for the soundtrack album?
This is another "cinematic" piece...to my ears, anyway...

I like your sense of arrangement and harmony, Hawks.
You have a good take on instruments' individual timbres,
and how to use them effectively against each other...

You seem this old guys' ears to be growing as a young
composer...

What's next? Composing for a full fledged vocal chorus?
You seem to have an imagination that can go anyway and
does not admit to any limitations...good for you...

[I find myself wondering if I've got any tunes you could
score some cello on...maybe I should write one...]

Always a pleasure, Hawks...

Ed

Check out my latest song called Next Time Around (w/jiguma)

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1557 days ago (August 21st, 2005)
	Should I wait for the soundtrack album? Thanks for listening to this piece and your feedback Ed! And yes I really want to add some Vocal chorus to this song... yeah that means I have to buy Jam Pack 1... again thanks. - Jem --- Friends! Macjammers! Countryman! Lend me your ears! Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

two inch roots	two inch roots said 1557 days ago (August 22nd, 2005)
	woah I can't believe you used garageband for this. It sounds great. You've got great production whoever it is. I could use some cool heavy beats though. But otherwise? It's really cool. Check out my latest song called Sarah's Song

CIPHER	CIPHER said 1556 days ago (August 22nd, 2005)
	Wow Fantastic. What an enjoyable experience in headphones. Check out my latest song called Is this anything

I.G.M.	I.G.M. said 1555 days ago (August 24th, 2005)
	Wonderful! Great tune. Go on composing and posting. It`s always a pleasure to listen to songs written by such a talented musician like you! Don`t stop learning, keep on playin`! I.G.M. Check out my latest song called I`m Gone

	said 1554 days ago (August 24th, 2005)
	Whoa... so good. the layering of instruments from the middle transition on through to the end was just beautiful. Again, your sense of music, accompaniment, and harmonies. Your use of timing change from the first half to the second half of the piece. White Hawks, you are one talented and special person. Keep up the music and I, for one, am glad you are here at macjams. Jack

Tadashi Togawa	Tadashi Togawa said 1553 days ago (August 25th, 2005)
	It tastes and is deep. The melody not only flows but also brings the scene. The composition is aggressive though it is quiet. Good tune. Check out my latest song called Mexican taste

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