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| holyparsnip said 1552 days ago (August 23rd, 2005) | |
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Word em up eh swood. Your style and flow is real nice. i think some people here might be afraid of this kind of stuff because I have that feeling (By listening to top rated and picked stuff) that are middle aged white people. Hip-hop and rap is as valid as any other type of music. Said. I agree with sacred on some points, the vocals need to be rehashed. Hip hop is running over itself. The stuff that I listen to currently Is MF Doom, Quasimoto, the Peceptionists, Ghostface Killah, RJD2, 13 and God. These artists are about changing the game and standing out. Do the same eveytime you pic up a mic. Reinvent/invent a style that is only yours. This song is a good starting point. And make MAD beats~ Check out my latest song called Democracy Despotism Scale (collab)
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| Shimky said 1550 days ago (August 25th, 2005) | |
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Vocal Recording Quality I'm not into hip hop at all. Sorry!! But I can still appreciate that the music is good. I think you say "Niger" far too often - it must be about 200 times!!! I have nothing against the word (well, as long as it's only used by blacks) but I just think that you should try some variety. I think the vocal recording quality should be improved. You sound a little distant compared to the music. I don't know if just turning up the vocals would be enough - maybe. Check out my latest song called Funeral
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Scared sacred
I like your beat and therefore I say it's good. What else can I say?
Your rapping style is unprofessional, but that's to be expected given that you say you don't rap. You constantly sound like you're out of breath, though. Did you record this whole thing in one take?
I give you a low score for production because the vocals are too quiet and the quality of the recording is poor. It's not really bad, but, I'm being objective. I give you a low score for creativity because the lyrics, though well-written, deal with the same tiresome subject that rappers have been working for 20 years: the thug lifestyle.