one day(temptation) by khanusx
Genre: Folk (contemporary)
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this song was wrote very quickly one night when me and my mate first got our digital workstation,dont know if anyone will like it as its our first attempt at recording digitally, any tips or advice would be helpfull thanx
Lyrics:
LYRICS TO COMEHardware:
YAMAHA AW16G, MXL 900 MICS, TAKAMINE ELECTRO CLASSSICALSoftware:
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svenaxelson
that was amazing times infinity
svenaxelson
that was amazing times infinity
This is very, very good. Songwriting and performance as
good as the pros. Congrats on a fine first pass at digital
recording. With lyricism, grace and style like this, makes
me think you are professional analog people. Are you?
Been around the block a few hundred times? This has a
Simon and Garfunkel magic vibe. Excellent, excellent
guitar work. Sweet vocalizing. Wow.
khanusx
no not really,im only 23 so ihavent been around the block just yet i dont think, all i had before was this rubbish 4 tracker thingy ma bob, took me ages to work out how to use the new one, thanx for listenig much appriciated
TobinMueller
I really like the style you bring to your performance. Your
vocals match the guitar on this track in the right way.
Very cool unique sound, cool use of string harmonics and
delicate playing, nicely balanced introduction. I like vocal
doubling and the ahs. And I like the internal rhymes,
especially perfume and lurkin, and the phrase "glimpse of
temptations" which go well with the vocals bends you are
using. When you move into your chorus, your tempo
increases and your vocals aren't as tight, which sticks out
in my ears, and abruptly slows as the verse returns, which
could be smoother (like the ritardando you use into your
"glimpse of temptations" tag, which works well). The use
of the phrase "rock 'n roll", altho I dig the idea, isn't
reflected in the arrangement, and maybe you could add
something, like electric guitar, to an instrumental bridge
and to the ending vamp, to highlight this aspect of the
story; it might add a cool literal-metaphorical element.
Still, very compelling track. You are painting wonderful
moments of alienation and want with your voice and
guitar.
jackstone
Your guitar works is amazing!
This is great work!
Einarus
Excellent songwriting! Great chord progression and I really liked the
buildup. The lyrics are very good, as well.
Great performances!
Fav'ed, DL'ed!
Matte Black
Immediately thought of "The Battle of Evermore" by Led Zepplin. Largely because of the vocals but even the guitars reminded me of the mandolin. Please don't think that is meant as a criticism. I'm gonna leave you alone after this post so you don't think you have a stalker! I'm just happy to find somebody out there who realizes that huge drums and feedback are NOT the answer to creative block. You obviously take this process very seriously and a lot of "musicians" could learn from that ethic.
Thanks again.
Matt