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First completed song that I recorded in Garageband. This is actually the second posting of this song because some panning was messed up on the first one. I am looking for what you think about it and what could be improved. Thanks
Lyrics:
V1
She wears flowers in her hair
Quite rare to see her in despair
So walk with me I'll take you there
Hold me close our loving affair
C
Come sit with me we'll be one
You turn my head round and round
Come ride with me we'll be one
You lift me up off the ground
V2
She stares out into the room
Her dress is covered in a bloom
So walk with me we'll slip away
Hand in hand we'll skip time
C
Come sit with me we'll be one
You turn my head round and round
Come ride with me we'll be one
You lift me up off the ground
Hardware:
G4, washburn acoustic, fender bass, Shure SM57 mic
Software:
GB2
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Cool tune &mdash 08/23/05 - 07:20:22 PM
Me wants to do the 'plugged' version with drums and
distortion and loud stuff....
Good job. [ Reply to This ]
Cool tune &mdash 08/23/05 - 09:41:44 PM
I have thought about doing some of this stuff electric and definitely with drums.
I just kind of put these raw versions on here to see if anybody liked the songs
enough for me to pursue them. Thanks [ Reply to This ]
... &mdash 08/24/05 - 06:04:38 PM
... &mdash 08/24/05 - 06:04:53 PM
right channel? &mdash 08/27/05 - 09:49:59 AM
Dig the song, had a Nirvana unplugged vibe (sorry to
compare all your stuff to someone else, it's my version of
a compliment, really!). However, there was nothing in the
right channel... was that on purpose? I had to listen twice
to make sure it wasn't my equipment.
I gotta agree with weitermitfahrer, I'd love to rock this out
& add an edgy vocal - but I'm like that.
Great song, thanks for sharing! [ Reply to This ]
right channel? &mdash 08/27/05 - 10:40:13 AM
I had some channels messed up earlier and that might still be the problem. I'll
look into it. Thanks for the Nirvana comment they are one of my many
influences. [ Reply to This ]
Hey &mdash 08/27/05 - 08:18:42 PM
It's totally panned to the left through the song.
Is it supposed to be like this? [ Reply to This ]
Hey &mdash 08/27/05 - 08:37:22 PM
The panning to the left channel is unintentional. My settings might have gotten
messed up on the mix down. I will look into this problem further, thanks. [ Reply to This ]
: ) &mdash 03/29/07 - 09:41:03 AM
This is LOVELY...I really love the beginning You got that GREAT : ) Nice & cool laydback tune...Beautiful lyrics - Happy I get to lissen to You ! I'm sure You can do it even better ! Maybe som kongas or drums but also nice with guitar only ! Its only on the leftspeaker
THANX !! [ Reply to This ]
If you enjoy... &mdash 03/30/07 - 12:51:39 AM
Hey ZOI,
If you enjoy this piece then my new one in the works should blow your socks off. I'll let you know when it's posted. Thanks for listening. The left speaker thing was a terribly bad mistake.
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potential &mdash 04/08/08 - 01:21:02 PM
like that guitar intro. nice lyrics. on the vocals you sound like you could relax a little more and feel them a bit more. i hear some nirvana influence in there as stated by others. could be a really great song me thinks. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks &mdash 04/09/08 - 12:40:14 AM
Hi Chance,
Thanks again for checking out my older stuff. I've improved a lot on my vocal delivery since this song so maybe I should rerecord the whole thing some day. Thanks for stopping in! [ Reply to This ]
worth it &mdash 04/09/08 - 07:59:17 AM
i think its definitely a song worth re recording if you feel the desire. [ Reply to This ]
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distortion and loud stuff....
Good job.
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