Out of Time

urbnite

Genre: Acoustic

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and older song... been encouraged to upload something.

bad recording, again... sorry. think of it as a demo.

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Lyrics

these raindrops
falling down
break me down
in a sea of tears
and i guess i'm out

i'm just lonely, wandering
circling round and round
conveniently pondering
breaking and breaking down
everything around me

i'm so tired
can't feel the wet
soaked to the bone
and then we met
and you took me out

now we're slowly wandering
circling round and round
conveniently pondering
breaking and breaking down
everything around me

and i'm out of time
out of place
out of sorts
out of me

now i'm slowly wandering
circling round and round
conveniently pondering
breaking and breaking down
everything around me

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Hits: 879
Comments: 5
Fans: 0
Plays: 71
Downloads: 55
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Aug 25, 2005 - 08:38:49 AM
Last Updated: Aug 25, 2005 - 02:39:24 PM Last Played: Apr 19, 2009 - 06:11:15 PM

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av01der

av01der said 1553 days ago (August 26th, 2005)

Title of comment.
Lovely little demo, urb. Have you considered recording the
guitar and vocals as separate tracks? I know from personal
experience that it is DAMN hard to sing and play guitar at the
same time. ;) I think you could turn this demo into a stellar
song if you were able to concentrate on the vocals and guitar
separately.

I was intrigued by this second party that you mentioned in
the second verse... I would have liked to hear more of what
became of that chance meeting.

Check out my latest song called dawn/drive

urbnite	urbnite said 1553 days ago (August 26th, 2005)
	_ thanks - yeah, i'll be rerecording some stuff when i have my apartment to myself, but not sure that'll be soon... as far as the second party... i only knew her for a couple hours of one day... so it's fitting she leaves the song so quickly i suppose. Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

caroline	caroline said 1553 days ago (August 26th, 2005)
	okay - quit smoking..... fix the room..... fix the recording and..... i'll pay good, good money for more - thanks for sharing - i enjoyed it - a lot x Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf

Shimky	Shimky said 1553 days ago (August 26th, 2005)
	Lots Of Potential A well written song with nice chords (and changes). I especially liked the lyrics, "And I'm out of time, out of place, out of sorts, out of me". But the recording really is awful! I know this is only a demo but it's almost hard to listen to. Get it recorded proper like and let's have another gander. Check out my latest song called Funeral

urbnite	urbnite said 1551 days ago (August 28th, 2005)
	thanks thanks for the comments everyone... i think i might have some time this week to re-record some things, maybe i'll do this one... :) Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

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Name: Darren

i'm not good at talking about myself! i will say that you may be in for some varying qualities of recording. some bad, some not so bad. i'm getting better at the 'engineering' side of things, so it should be continuously improving. also - if ... [see more]

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