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This is a collaboration with the incredible Daphna! I am so Honored and Pleased that she agreed to add her magical piano to my song.
I hope you like it as much as I do!
I hope you like it as much as I do!
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Lyrics
This is the story of woman who said
That her day was so long,
Thought she'd never find her bed,
She swore the sun was so tired
She watched it slip beneath a blanket of stars.
She went ahead and poured us both,
A long tall glass of fine red wine,
And proceeded to tell me that she's loosing her mind
(Chorus)
She's lookin for things she knows that she'll never find.
Wasting her days, Wasting her nights.
Lord knows wastin' too much time
I'm always jumping through their firey hoops,
She said, I'm walking their tight rope with my head in a noose,
All this concentration is reallly bringing me down.
It's funny the reward is never in sight, but the Illusion is blinding and she can't close her eyes,
Acting like a soldier at war, she's heading for the front line....
(Chorus)
She said I'm tired of all this running in place,
I just can't seem to keep up with the pace,
I'ts like a slap in the face when you don't even know what's wrong.
She took a sip of her wine and then she looked at me,
Does this happen to you, It's always happening to me,
Or am I result of someone's twisted joke?
Someones twisted joke?
I said go ahead a pour another glass of wine, I've got no where to go and plenty of time,
Tell me yours and I'll tell you mine,
Cause I know the story of woman who said
that her day was so long,
thought she'd never find her bed,
She swore the sun was so tired
she watched it slip beneath a blanket of stars.
That her day was so long,
Thought she'd never find her bed,
She swore the sun was so tired
She watched it slip beneath a blanket of stars.
She went ahead and poured us both,
A long tall glass of fine red wine,
And proceeded to tell me that she's loosing her mind
(Chorus)
She's lookin for things she knows that she'll never find.
Wasting her days, Wasting her nights.
Lord knows wastin' too much time
I'm always jumping through their firey hoops,
She said, I'm walking their tight rope with my head in a noose,
All this concentration is reallly bringing me down.
It's funny the reward is never in sight, but the Illusion is blinding and she can't close her eyes,
Acting like a soldier at war, she's heading for the front line....
(Chorus)
She said I'm tired of all this running in place,
I just can't seem to keep up with the pace,
I'ts like a slap in the face when you don't even know what's wrong.
She took a sip of her wine and then she looked at me,
Does this happen to you, It's always happening to me,
Or am I result of someone's twisted joke?
Someones twisted joke?
I said go ahead a pour another glass of wine, I've got no where to go and plenty of time,
Tell me yours and I'll tell you mine,
Cause I know the story of woman who said
that her day was so long,
thought she'd never find her bed,
She swore the sun was so tired
she watched it slip beneath a blanket of stars.
Peter Greenstone
It's a warm, poetic song. I like the simple acoustic
arrangement. Daphna's piano playing is excellent as
always. While I like your voice I think you could improve
on the pitch accuracy. You tend to go sharp a lot and on
a song like this it's pretty exposed. But the tone of your
voice and your phrasing sound great. There was some
mic popping that could be avoided by using a pop filter.
But you can also reduce the popping on what you have
already recorded by dropping out the bass on the track.
I've found that the most audible part of the pop and other
blowing-into-the-mic noise is at the bottom end of the
EQ and is quite isolated from the good part of the vocal
recording.