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| Radio Bikini said 1543 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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emotional Thanks, Pelican. I appreciate the positive feedback right off the bat. It's a little intimidating posting music here for the first time. By the way, I'm impressed with the two songs you've posted. Thanks for sharing! Check out my latest song called Doxology
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| thetiler said 1543 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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enjoy listening to this This is very pleasant to listen to. Like those piano chops, like how you gointo the violin symphonic-synth part. This has a lot going on it. Lots of stuff in there for sure. Reminds me of John Tesh which I adore! Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| cjhoose said 1543 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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pretty piano delightful to listen to! The only things that bother me a little bit are the handclaps and the abrupt ending. Check out my latest song called Julia
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| perceptualvortex said 1543 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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Like that piano The piano keeps me interested, but you've mixed in a lot of great accompaniment... I like the backing strings, for example. The handclaps didn't work for me... I guess I'd prefer more drumbeats during those parts. But that's a minor point, because this is a cool tune. Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)
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| SlimGirlFat said 1543 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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Nice track here. I'm not so sure about the handclaps either, however the piano playing is lovely and I do like the strings & synths mixed in. Not hot on the organ it seemed a littel out of place. Lovely melody overall, for a first track posting this is very nice indeed. look forward to hearing more from you. Oh and welcome to Macjams. SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| wombat said 1542 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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good first try parts are really good other bits a little weak also didnt like handclaps maybe they come in too soon.but really good first go,keep up good work |
| Radio Bikini said 1542 days ago (September 4th, 2005) | |
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good first try Thanks, Wombat. Apparently the handclaps are everyone's least favorite part. Could you elaborate a on the weakest parts of the song? Any info would be much appreciated. Thanks! Check out my latest song called Doxology
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| drakonis said 1542 days ago (September 5th, 2005) | |
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you playing the kb? Nice piano work. I like moody, in fact I look for music that has some kind of emotional connection to the listener. I think this is pretty good in that respect, nice melody, and I like the upbeat change in the middle. The drums and claps were a bit loud and distracting and seemed a little odd, I'd soften them or choose different loops or placement. The ending was too quick, I'd slow/ritard the very end, maybe add a few additional final arpeggios & chords? Other than my critiquing it to death, I actually liked it, welcome to MJ! ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| Radio Bikini said 1542 days ago (September 5th, 2005) | |
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you playing the kb? Thanks, Drakonis! I appreciate the time you've taken to list the positive and negatives of the song. Having this forum for music is very helpful in that close associates don't always give you the most useful feedback to keep from stepping on your toes. Check out my latest song called Doxology
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| holyparsnip said 1542 days ago (September 5th, 2005) | |
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Car test Would you play this in your car? Windows down? Okay if you really like all of John Teshes music mixed in between your favorite Yanni tracks, then yes, yes you would. Yes, nice composition (getting tired of saying that), but what this song needs is an edge. I don't mean a heavy metal guitar either. It needs some more layers, different tempo's underneath, to add complexity to the listeners ear. It's easy to become complacent here. Put up stuff, and get some nice people to say some nice things about a song you just made, dandy and fine. I am saying, what you have is a start, now you need to push it or else your music will end up in the piano looped graveyard, which really is most of this site. Check out my latest song called Democracy Despotism Scale (collab)
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| Einarus said 1541 days ago (September 6th, 2005) | |
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Just what I needed today I've always been a sucker for moody piano pieces like this, and it really doesn't hurt having some cool drum beats to go with it. That's quite the pianoplaying you got going there, but the production could be better, I think... The piano, to begin with, sounds a bit cold. If it were a bit warmer it'd really boost the emotion of it. I also thought the strings came in a bit suddenly about a third into the song. I think they could be eased in a bit better. But then again, that's just my opinion. I agree with Slimmie and Perceptualvortex about the handclaps, but the organ worked for me. The volume of some of the drum loops - good choice on them, by the way - was a bit loud. But I really liked this overall. Great job! Fav'ed and if I had my iMac - downloaded! Welcome to MJ! Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours
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| baucis said 1482 days ago (November 4th, 2005) | |
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Sounds fantastic Even if I agree with the others about the ending (so abrupt), I love this song and the piano solos really touched me. Congratulations! |
| baucis said 1476 days ago (November 10th, 2005) | |
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Again I listened to it several times and I changed my mind concerning the end. I just love the song. Simply beautiful. |
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PelicanSky
i really feel the emotion in this, i really like this song. im
definitly adding this to my favorites. the piano is really nice &
your very talented with itt. keep making more!!