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Description:
Song music written by me but the lyrics written by a mate. Its about 5 years old but thought I would share!
Lyrics:
Ceiling decends, Everything is clear.
Far from the smell, I can taste the fear.
What have I done, is it walk not run.
Don't turn around, no chewing gum.
Air is getting thin, walls roll in tight.
Ma, let me go can I go out tonight?
I see you stare from your safely safe view.
But he's not alone, it's you, you and you.
CHORUS
And every now and then the truth is white as sand.
Less a foreign shore but a common land.
Thoughtless condolance or might I just make it?
My load cries loud but I'm still trying to fake it.
Sunset, sunset. Can't recall the first kiss.
The life that I lived, the light that I miss.
Try not to think, confront it head on.
The turn of the tide, it still hasn't gone
Sing sing along, it should not be long.
Why, who asked you? No nothings wrong.
A could of smoke that I've grown to hate
I'm sick of the weight.... I'm tied to the weight.
CHORUS x2
Hardware:
Mates studio/very nice/once off
Software:
ProTools
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Very nice &mdash 09/29/05 - 07:58:16 PM
I very much enjoyed this piece. The vocals were a little loud to me, but
I still really liked it. Very nice.
Bob Roberts [ Reply to This ]
Very nice &mdash 10/01/05 - 04:43:44 AM
I agree with the vocal being too loud. Unfortunately I did not master this one.
I might be able to get it mastered again if I ask nicely. Otherwise it's gotta
stay the same! Thank for posting and I'm glad you liked it!! [ Reply to This ]
Nice indeed... &mdash 09/30/05 - 04:34:40 AM
... though I agree with bobroberts. Vocals seem a bit too close to the
front somehow, especially at the start. Nice song for all that my only
criticism of the writing is that the lyrics seem to fight the melody on
some lines; Like the little piano figure in there, and the little strum
towards the end and the ending is lovely. [ Reply to This ]
Nice &mdash 09/30/05 - 08:00:31 AM
Nice tune, nice lyrics especially the internal rhymes. Nice understated
accompaniment, with some nice inventive guitar shimmers to give it an
original feel. Clear production, intimate. Would have liked a more jazz,
Brazilian bass or more solo-esque bass work on occasion to round out
the performances. Very nice track. I'm off to check out your other
works... [ Reply to This ]
Excellent song! &mdash 09/30/05 - 08:57:39 AM
I like the quaintness of it &mdash 10/02/05 - 09:13:09 AM
I love music that can be written neat and to the point. And this is a nice
example of the power of a carefully regulated tune. Lots of nice tasty
tones.
You have a nice voice, very radio friendly with the music of todayI think.
Nice going Gav! [ Reply to This ]
dl faved ! &mdash 04/20/08 - 06:56:21 AM
So glad You're still here with Your music! People just leave & take thier songs awy..:( Your music,voice&recording is GREAT , You were one of the first I heard here longago so they mean alot to me your songs Lena [ Reply to This ]
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I still really liked it. Very nice.
Bob Roberts
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