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Afterglow (collaboration with Jesushairdo)


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This is an original Japanese composition by Jesushairdo which I translated and sang in English. It's not a word-for-word translation as that is impossible, but I extracted the essence of the song per Jesushairdo's description. I took liberties in modifying the melody in certain areas and added harmonies, but for the most part, I stayed dedicated to the spirit of the Japanese song. Jesushairdo did an amazing arrangement. I hope this song can even come close to the original.
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Lyrics
AFTERGLOW (English Version)
(melody by Jesushairdo; lyrics and vocals by Leon)

(Touch/feel) the (rays/heat)
of the sun
in the dwindling
light of day
Chase a dream
in the night
it fades away

And I pretend
with a hope
these illusions
may be real
but I know
in my heart
they never will

No matter
how much I think of you
It's a vision
that always fades away
My imaginations
take my heart
to a dreamland in the (sunset/twilight)
and fantasies of sweet love
in the afterglow...

Catch the rays of the sun
it spills from my fingers
and drifts away
like castle made of sand
washed away by my tears
Disappears like a ghost (of/in) the night
Leaves me yearning for more

Catch the (song/waves) in the (air/sea)
it escapes from my fingers
and drifts away
But I'll never say never / (But my love is forever)
Feel the/my gentle caress
like the breeze and the warmth of the afterglow...
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Uploaded: Oct 02, 2005 - 12:54:59 PM
Last Updated: Apr 23, 2006 - 10:25:08 AM Last Played: Nov 15, 2009 - 04:27:01 AM
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Comments
Audiologic said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
The Vocals...
Your vocals are so clear and professional. The music is very well written
too. I like how you wait until almost half way through, extend a note, then
restart including the electric guitar. I also like the break before the last
vocal set.

You did a good job of translating and having the english vocals still go to
the beat.

Ben
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kathyma said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
The Vocals...
Thanks, Ben. I spent the whole day yesterday trying to strike a balance between
Jessushairdo's awesome arrangement and my vocals. It was hard to translate
the song because Japanese is very syllabic even when sung, while English words
are often multisyllabic. I was more worried that I would not give justice to the
Japanese essence of the song, and now I feel relieved that you, one of the great
musicians here, actually like it. Thanks, man, that was so inspiring to hear from
you!
Leon said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
The Vocals...
oops, sorry..i forgot to log out my freind....i borrowed her laptop...

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Einarus said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
Sounds pro
I liked the earlier version Jesushairdo posted, but I like this even more.
The vocals in this sound fantastic! So clear and crisp!
You're one heck of a singer.
Very nice songwriting and good progression.
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Leon said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
Sounds pro
Thanks, man... You are quite a young musician, very talented and prolific. I
should be checking more of your music soon!

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jesushairdo said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
Whoa!
I cant believe that you actually sang my song, Leon!!
This is so amazing! Your voice is excellent!
And I really loved the way you sang "But Ill never say never".
Excellent translation as well! Drifts away. Thats exactly the
word I wanted to use but I couldnt quite come up with?
hahaha! Thank you so much, Leon.
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Leon said 1515 days ago (October 2nd, 2005)
Whoa!
Hey, Jes, we made it, dude! Encouraging feedback so far! I think the honors
should mostly go to you.. i knew that was an awesome Japanese song the
moment i heard it. I just embellished it a bit. Hope to have more collaborations
with you in the future.

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The lion roars, the eagle soars.
Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
TobinMueller said 1514 days ago (October 3rd, 2005)
A great collaboration
What a great collaboration. So glad you two are working together.
Jesushairdo's song are so good, and Leon your voice fits them perfectly.
Great mainstream pop. I like the layers, melody, pulsing chordal backing.
Very strong song construction, vocal performance, bass line. In my ears,
too much reverb, not enough electric guitar, perhaps a simpler snare line
in the drumming choices, and something to fill out the middle to create a
more classic pop anthem build (string runs to fuller chords, electric
guitar). But a solid, solid track and wonderful tune.
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Leon said 1514 days ago (October 3rd, 2005)
A great collaboration
Thanks, Tobin! You are probably the most respected musician in this site
because of your amazing music, vast experience and critical ear, and we
certainly appreciate the praise and tips. Jesushairdo and I made this
collaboration on a whim and I later realized it was a work from the heart.
Thanks for finding the time to listen!

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Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
MisterFrap said 1514 days ago (October 3rd, 2005)
Great!
This song sound very professional.
Good Job...
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Leon said 1514 days ago (October 3rd, 2005)
Great!
Thanks so much for your comment. It was a one-line comment that is enough
to make my day (and Jesushairdo's, too)! :-)

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The lion roars, the eagle soars.
Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
jesushairdo said 1514 days ago (October 3rd, 2005)
Great!
yep. checking these great comments is a great way to start Tuesday morning here in Tokyo!! thank u thank u thank u!

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