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Description:
This is the first song in series of 6 that were written and recorded in one 24 hour period. It's part of a Pop Opera Musical Mini-Concept Album, entitled: Candle Wax.
This goes with Candle Wax Soul (song #6)
and Luv (song #2)
Lyrics:
will she see right through me
a million miles beyond my flesh & bones
just one more shade invisible
hungry for the taste of being known
will she see into me
finding all my secrets and my lies
will she love me anyway
and see beyond the shadows of my life
will she see right through me
will she see right through me
will she see right through me
beyond the man that I pretend to be
will she fall into my arms
like the women I have seen on TV
will she see into me
and find a cozy room to call her home
stretching out upon my dreams
to fall asleep in everything I know
will she see right through me
will she see right through me
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Nice singin &mdash 10/10/05 - 09:04:20 PM
Lots of soul here and the singin seems spot on with lots of melodic talent.
Like the harmonies, panning is cool, neat fuzz sounds.
Nice going!
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Another Download &mdash 10/10/05 - 09:10:48 PM
Great... I just cleaned up my itunes and here I go cluttering it up again :)
Vocal nice and soulful- good use of guitar effects. Clean lead was sweet! [ Reply to This ]
3 down &mdash 10/11/05 - 03:24:07 AM
3 down &mdash 10/11/05 - 07:58:03 PM
Great stuff! &mdash 10/11/05 - 07:05:51 AM
That`s the way I like it! Groovy, great harmonies, superb chords but not too much! Very catchy, wonderful feel!
10-10-10-10
I.G.M. [ Reply to This ]
You've reached &mdash 10/11/05 - 08:55:50 AM
the place in my ladder of respect where I see a new song posted and
download it, whether I've listened to it first or not.
Not too many people have that honor ;)
Wow. [ Reply to This ]
You've reached &mdash 10/11/05 - 08:00:20 PM
I'm absolutely honored! What a nice thing to say. I'm glad your diggin' the little
gremlins that escape the clutches of my mind...
Kudos to you! [ Reply to This ]
Your music is really something... &mdash 10/11/05 - 10:51:17 AM
Like the rest of your material, this is first class, pure pro. Well done in
absolutely every aspect. You, sir, are a killer. I love the feeling of this
song, and every sound of it as well. I'm on my third listening in a row...
I hope you keep writing, playing, and producing, and bringing your gems
here.
All these songs written and recorded in a 24 hour period... That is mind-
boggling. The material is amazing; its execution is flawless. [ Reply to This ]
Your music is really something... &mdash 10/11/05 - 08:02:46 PM
After a response like that, how can I not keep posting tunes...? Thanks for the
really kind words. [ Reply to This ]
lovely, funky &mdash 10/11/05 - 12:17:43 PM
lovely, funky &mdash 10/11/05 - 12:18:13 PM
Wow &mdash 10/11/05 - 02:49:38 PM
Beautiful song, great arrangement, great vocals.
I would pay for it... [ Reply to This ]
First time I have listened.... &mdash 10/11/05 - 07:14:33 PM
to any of your songs (I think). Man, this is one tight, well done song.
You got a great voice and this song is rich... vocal harmonies, the
beat, all the instrumentation. You got my attention.
Jack [ Reply to This ]
Got me dancing! &mdash 10/11/05 - 11:26:27 PM
Wow! Great groove, infectious beat, and the vocals are first rate!
Instrumental and vocal productions are innovative. We needs to see more
of this kind of music around here! Keep them coming, Spike!
This one goes to my ipod! [ Reply to This ]
X-ray vision &mdash 10/12/05 - 12:43:02 AM
Excellent song, outstanding singing. Great harmonization.
Thank you for posting this, Mr. I.Spike
(...maybe consider a lead apron instead of the Armani?) [ Reply to This ]
Lovely... &mdash 10/13/05 - 09:38:08 AM
The wah-ish guitar, the keyboards, the quality of the singing.... each
whacking the nail very precisely on the head. Fun and funky. [ Reply to This ]
funky funky &mdash 10/13/05 - 05:46:28 PM
yeah baby
I see straight thru to the funkyest dood around.
Seriously, you are developing as a songwriter. Best one yet. [ Reply to This ]
Excellent &mdash 10/15/05 - 05:57:00 AM
A good song and an excellent production? Is that you makin all the
voices? Admirable work anyway ... wish I could sing just a fraction as
good as this! [ Reply to This ]
i had far too many windows open, &mdash 10/15/05 - 08:36:52 AM
got distracted and thought i was listening to the radio! heck - that saved me spending 79p at the istore! thank you. is it me? i really wish that the end hadn't been so sudden - otherwise, fabidoo x [ Reply to This ]
Nice one! &mdash 10/15/05 - 09:08:52 AM
Seems like a good song to listen to while relaxing on weekends. You did
a good job at making a Breaks drum loop sound nice and soft. [ Reply to This ]
very slick &mdash 10/15/05 - 09:32:35 PM
... production. very nice vox. diggin that vox pan too :)
this has a very nice 70's vibe
8) [ Reply to This ]
Uhhh! &mdash 10/16/05 - 05:23:51 PM
Uhhh! &mdash 10/18/05 - 12:25:34 PM
Your comment appeals to my absurd nature... I chuckled... I'm glad I was not
drinking milk at the time, it might have flown out my nose.... [ Reply to This ]
Very Pro &mdash 10/17/05 - 07:16:35 AM
Retro and very pro. Old skool vibe and production techniques. Great
song AND great recording. [ Reply to This ]
Excellent &mdash 10/23/05 - 09:39:52 AM
Vocals, playing, arrangement, melody, lyrics, production - all wonderful.
I'm looking forward to hearing the other songs. [ Reply to This ]
vocals are outstanding! &mdash 10/25/05 - 03:34:53 PM
Professional production. This is very pleasant to listen to. Nice and catchy easy listening...smoove... vocals sound a mixture of Stevie and George. Thanks for sharing. [ Reply to This ]
nice &mdash 10/28/05 - 10:47:34 AM
I rally llike the layered vocal effect. The guitar solo is very tasteful. It would be nice to have a little variation in the rythm track. Overall a very good piece. [ Reply to This ]
oh that voice... &mdash 10/29/05 - 08:38:10 AM
...what can i say? I just love that perfect voice of yours... the harmonies
kick ass. [ Reply to This ]
high quality production &mdash 10/31/05 - 02:18:30 PM
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune ! [ Reply to This ]
high quality production &mdash 10/31/05 - 02:19:20 PM
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune ! [ Reply to This ]
high quality production &mdash 10/31/05 - 02:19:22 PM
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune ! [ Reply to This ]
Jamiroqoui? George Michael? &mdash 12/02/05 - 01:01:16 AM
I don't know, but it's funky and soulful and smooth. Your vocals are simply outstanding, but it's the mix that really blows my mind. Man, I have a lot to learn. Sick song.
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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler
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I enjoy your music &mdash 02/13/06 - 06:16:45 AM
pig hearted boy, made me want to explore more of your posts. You
certainly are gifted. This has it all for me. Its accesible, tatsy playing,
great production value. [ Reply to This ]
I enjoy your music &mdash 02/13/06 - 02:17:52 PM
great &mdash 12/29/06 - 02:30:15 PM
great vocals, great lyrics, great song. Very funky and groovy... Love it... dig it... fav it [ Reply to This ]
Cool pop &mdash 02/04/07 - 08:25:27 PM
Nice production. Excellent guitars all through this. Nice work on the vocals. This is going straight to my iPod. [ Reply to This ]
ooooo &mdash 02/07/07 - 09:56:29 AM
LOVE that vocal! LOVE those harmonies! cool music. guess i just plain LOVE THIS SONG! nicely done - anne [ Reply to This ]
Dude, &mdash 02/20/07 - 10:12:54 PM
Maybe you should consider putting a little more CARE into your songs.
Kidding.
This is exquisite. [ Reply to This ]
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Like the harmonies, panning is cool, neat fuzz sounds.
Nice going!
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