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This is the first song in series of 6 that were written and recorded in one 24 hour period. It's part of a Pop Opera Musical Mini-Concept Album, entitled: Candle Wax.
This goes with Candle Wax Soul (song #6)
and Luv (song #2)
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Lyrics

will she see right through me
a million miles beyond my flesh & bones
just one more shade invisible
hungry for the taste of being known
will she see into me
finding all my secrets and my lies
will she love me anyway
and see beyond the shadows of my life

will she see right through me
will she see right through me

will she see right through me
beyond the man that I pretend to be
will she fall into my arms
like the women I have seen on TV
will she see into me
and find a cozy room to call her home
stretching out upon my dreams
to fall asleep in everything I know

will she see right through me
will she see right through me
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Hits: 3457
Comments: 39
Fans: 16
Plays: 686
Downloads: 173
Votes: 35
Uploaded: Oct 10, 2005 - 08:53:48 PM
Last Updated: Oct 09, 2005 - 06:13:13 PM Last Played: Nov 15, 2009 - 04:27:48 PM
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Comments
thetiler said 1503 days ago (October 10th, 2005)
Nice singin
Lots of soul here and the singin seems spot on with lots of melodic talent.
Like the harmonies, panning is cool, neat fuzz sounds.

Nice going!


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aclarke said 1503 days ago (October 10th, 2005)
Another Download
Great... I just cleaned up my itunes and here I go cluttering it up again :)

Vocal nice and soulful- good use of guitar effects. Clean lead was sweet!
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Pie said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
3 down
3 to go

I can't wait :-)


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I. Spike said 1502 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
3 down
Right on Pie. I guess now I have to unveil the other three, eh?
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I.G.M. said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
Great stuff!
That`s the way I like it! Groovy, great harmonies, superb chords but not too much! Very catchy, wonderful feel!

10-10-10-10

I.G.M.
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Einarus said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
You've reached
the place in my ladder of respect where I see a new song posted and
download it, whether I've listened to it first or not.
Not too many people have that honor ;)
Wow.
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I. Spike said 1502 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
You've reached
I'm absolutely honored! What a nice thing to say. I'm glad your diggin' the little
gremlins that escape the clutches of my mind...
Kudos to you!
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futzpucker said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
Your music is really something...
Like the rest of your material, this is first class, pure pro. Well done in
absolutely every aspect. You, sir, are a killer. I love the feeling of this
song, and every sound of it as well. I'm on my third listening in a row...

I hope you keep writing, playing, and producing, and bringing your gems
here.

All these songs written and recorded in a 24 hour period... That is mind-
boggling. The material is amazing; its execution is flawless.
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I. Spike said 1502 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
Your music is really something...
After a response like that, how can I not keep posting tunes...? Thanks for the
really kind words.
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Tom Atwood said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
lovely, funky
very nice harmonies. Excellent!
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Tom Atwood said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
lovely, funky
very nice harmonies. Excellent!
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MisterFrap said 1503 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
Wow
Beautiful song, great arrangement, great vocals.
I would pay for it...
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said 1502 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
First time I have listened....
to any of your songs (I think). Man, this is one tight, well done song.
You got a great voice and this song is rich... vocal harmonies, the
beat, all the instrumentation. You got my attention.

Jack
Leon said 1502 days ago (October 11th, 2005)
Got me dancing!
Wow! Great groove, infectious beat, and the vocals are first rate!
Instrumental and vocal productions are innovative. We needs to see more
of this kind of music around here! Keep them coming, Spike!
This one goes to my ipod!
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Noel Project said 1502 days ago (October 12th, 2005)
X-ray vision
Excellent song, outstanding singing. Great harmonization.
Thank you for posting this, Mr. I.Spike

(...maybe consider a lead apron instead of the Armani?)
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mandolinquent said 1501 days ago (October 13th, 2005)
Lovely...
The wah-ish guitar, the keyboards, the quality of the singing.... each
whacking the nail very precisely on the head. Fun and funky.
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rex said 1500 days ago (October 13th, 2005)
funky funky
yeah baby

I see straight thru to the funkyest dood around.

Seriously, you are developing as a songwriter. Best one yet.
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Cori Ander said 1499 days ago (October 15th, 2005)
Excellent
A good song and an excellent production? Is that you makin all the
voices? Admirable work anyway ... wish I could sing just a fraction as
good as this!
caroline said 1499 days ago (October 15th, 2005)
i had far too many windows open,
got distracted and thought i was listening to the radio! heck - that saved me spending 79p at the istore! thank you. is it me? i really wish that the end hadn't been so sudden - otherwise, fabidoo x
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abstractreality said 1499 days ago (October 15th, 2005)
Nice one!
Seems like a good song to listen to while relaxing on weekends. You did
a good job at making a Breaks drum loop sound nice and soft.
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Humble Jack said 1498 days ago (October 15th, 2005)
very slick
... production. very nice vox. diggin that vox pan too :)

this has a very nice 70's vibe

8)
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said 1498 days ago (October 16th, 2005)
Uhhh!
If she's blind she won't! Great song and production!
I. Spike said 1496 days ago (October 18th, 2005)
Uhhh!
Your comment appeals to my absurd nature... I chuckled... I'm glad I was not
drinking milk at the time, it might have flown out my nose....
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rmaclema said 1497 days ago (October 17th, 2005)
Very Pro
Retro and very pro. Old skool vibe and production techniques. Great
song AND great recording.
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said 1491 days ago (October 23rd, 2005)
Excellent
Vocals, playing, arrangement, melody, lyrics, production - all wonderful.
I'm looking forward to hearing the other songs.
FEEL said 1489 days ago (October 25th, 2005)
vocals are outstanding!
Professional production. This is very pleasant to listen to. Nice and catchy easy listening...smoove... vocals sound a mixture of Stevie and George. Thanks for sharing.
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krtaylo said 1486 days ago (October 28th, 2005)
nice
I rally llike the layered vocal effect. The guitar solo is very tasteful. It would be nice to have a little variation in the rythm track. Overall a very good piece.
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fairy beth said 1485 days ago (October 29th, 2005)
oh that voice...
...what can i say? I just love that perfect voice of yours... the harmonies
kick ass.
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pulse said 1483 days ago (October 31st, 2005)
high quality production
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune !
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pulse said 1483 days ago (October 31st, 2005)
high quality production
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune !
Check out my latest song called Coalesce (vent sombre mix)
pulse said 1483 days ago (October 31st, 2005)
high quality production
That one is calm and cozy and the voices are very well mastered. Pleasant
soul coloured tune !
Check out my latest song called Coalesce (vent sombre mix)
Joshosh said 1451 days ago (December 2nd, 2005)
Jamiroqoui? George Michael?
I don't know, but it's funky and soulful and smooth. Your vocals are simply outstanding, but it's the mix that really blows my mind. Man, I have a lot to learn. Sick song.

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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler

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ktb said 1378 days ago (February 13th, 2006)
I enjoy your music
pig hearted boy, made me want to explore more of your posts. You
certainly are gifted. This has it all for me. Its accesible, tatsy playing,
great production value.
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I. Spike said 1378 days ago (February 13th, 2006)
I enjoy your music
Thanks again for the kind words.
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craft said 1059 days ago (December 29th, 2006)
great
great vocals, great lyrics, great song. Very funky and groovy... Love it... dig it... fav it
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j2morrow said 1021 days ago (February 4th, 2007)
Cool pop
Nice production. Excellent guitars all through this. Nice work on the vocals. This is going straight to my iPod.
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said 1019 days ago (February 7th, 2007)
ooooo
LOVE that vocal! LOVE those harmonies! cool music. guess i just plain LOVE THIS SONG! nicely done - anne
said 1005 days ago (February 20th, 2007)
Dude,
Maybe you should consider putting a little more CARE into your songs.




Kidding.



This is exquisite.
Outtaorbit said 22 days ago (October 30th, 2009)
great
nicely done.....
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