This has a lot of great sounds in it... I like how you work the echo
and reverb!! The rolling synth line and drum beat tie it together
well. The only two suggestions I have are to either make the
scream at the end scarier (and more jarring) or take it out. Right
now it seems a little silly. Also, the piece ends suddenly and it
sounds like a mistake. Hmmm.. sometimes problems with the
song upload can do that.

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Great art by the way... is it your own illustration?

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Yes the way it cuts off was not in the original, It seems as though time was just cut short. In response to the illustration, Yes, it is mine. I really am a hobbiest at the creation of music and something incredible is happening because of it. I make music and it inspires me to make more illustrations!
Art come from everywhere so why not just pick something up and give it a try.
thanks for the nice comments!

Thew

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If you could fit the world in a shoebox, would you shake it up?
Thew

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If making music helps to inspire your illustrations, keep
at it.

I like the primitive drums in this.

I didn't think the scream was silly...it seemed like a battle-cry
for the dude riding the strange beast.

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