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A song about a girl from high school
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Lyrics
You talk to much
about new clothes and such
well, you let the boys look, yeah
you don't let them touch
And I don't like to say it
but that's just how I feel
Shut up Cecile!
You got a fancy car
and you're credit cards
you don't like much
maybe some caviar
You just went to school
to keep your daddy cool
but in the end
you're still my favorite fool
about new clothes and such
well, you let the boys look, yeah
you don't let them touch
And I don't like to say it
but that's just how I feel
Shut up Cecile!
You got a fancy car
and you're credit cards
you don't like much
maybe some caviar
You just went to school
to keep your daddy cool
but in the end
you're still my favorite fool
paulhenrys
I like your songwriting. It's direct and clear. This is a cool song. I've
donwloaded it, and it's on my iPod in regular rotation.
That being said, the arrangement is kind of muddy, both in the EQ'ing
and in a general "looseness" between the different parts, of which there
are too many. It's not loose in the sense of relaxed, but more in the
sense of not in rhythm. Is there a bass in there? If there is, it's pretty
far back in the mix. If there isn't, get one.
Your voice is good, so don't hide it with too many backing vocals,
octave double tracking, etc.
You know what might sound cool? A kind of Buddy Holly arrangement.
One guitar, bass and drums, with a little slapback echo on the vocal
and guitar, maybe one backing vocal on the chorus.
Yeah, I'm an opinionated SOB. I get worked up when I hear a good
song, and this is a good song.