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Fallen Frame by mrcjtm by BobRoberts [Email]
Genre: Emo

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Last Played: Nov 19, 2008 - 10:37:46 PM
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Uploaded: Oct 30, 2005 - 01:58:43 AM
Last Updated: Oct 29, 2005 - 08:33:16 PM
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Music and Lyrics written by mrjctm, vocals by Bob Roberts. I think this is a great song, and if you disagree, I pity the fool.

Lyrics:
I am the fallen frame in the hallway
a crooked leg in the morgue
im all thats haunting
pleasant, contrasting
warmly swimming to the deep end
slowly sinking
the flying thoughts come back again while i
think i might
come home

the curveless pitch returns come monday
with the weekend gone im loving more
and in every way prepared
the stars might shine through everyone but the earth
devours hearts
bleeding mouths without a mind to render false
and eyes running till they all turn red
slowly retreating
and look back again
to the south

carrying on
about needs and wants
ruptures spleens
and breaks up hearts
if there was one thing more
in this world the i abhor
its that you were nothing more
than what the cover told
me you were

i am coming to the end
of my wits
or what you might say
gets me through the days, the weeks, the months, the years
what little time
we hold, we share, we bought
we join, we split, we part
but still hold hands in the dark
just a little
taught

the days grow long
our hold grows strong
we wont have to do it alone
our hearts cant break
and our eyes wont tear
because we wont
forsake
our love this year
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This is a great song! &mdash 10/30/05 - 02:59:47 AM
This is a great great song. ANd your vocals are good for most of the time. I think that you are off pitce a few times.

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wow . . . dude ! . . &mdash 10/30/05 - 03:41:50 PM
this is sweet ! . .

absolutely the best song i've heard in a long time.

i pity the fool who thinks anything is off pitch in there ! . .

just beautiful . . .

cheers

lye

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What do I say? I'll just post an honest comment.... &mdash 10/31/05 - 06:08:14 AM
Well... lyrically, it's good... has depth.... the guitar kept the rhythm well throughout...

I got the feel that this song could go much father. It is definately a very "wordy" song (I'd call it a venting sogn: a person has a lot to say and lets it all out into whatever medium they can, be it music, art, dance, etc.....). Because of this, I can see it building in points. A few other instruments fading in and out, variance in tone....

The vocals to me seemed to be... shy. I did notice a few pitch problems, but it wasn't a huge problem. The style of vocal isn't my cup of tea but that's just my opinion. I think it would shine better if it was brought out mroe in certain sections to show some range.

Overall there is a base for a very good song here. It just needs some fine tuning.

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pretty good &mdash 11/09/05 - 11:52:41 PM
there's some popping noises made by air hitting the mic, i agree the vox may be off in some spots, but then it's alot better then my demos, maybe have some parts with some added emotion so it doesnt sorta sound the same through out. it's a good song though and your voice is beautiful

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hmm &mdash 01/10/06 - 12:22:11 AM
i like the lyrics. good vocals. tho it seems like you're a little close to the mic and it catches your breathing a little. a few times the vocals seem a little off key but are right on most of the time.

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Well Put &mdash 05/30/06 - 06:53:42 PM
This song was able to draw on my feelings.
To often people get caught up in "advising" and forget to comment on the song its self. You expressed yourself well here......

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okay &mdash 02/18/08 - 10:08:41 PM
it was okay. vocals sounded a bit strange, i agree that your vocals are off pitch in some areas. I also think that the guitar kind of becomes repetitive, and would sound better if it had just a normal effect to it, and same goes for your vocals. if you tried singing in a higher pitch with no effects on both the guitar, and vocals. i know in garageband there is a "matrixreverb" effect towards the bottom in the effects, maybe if you tried adding that to vocals and guitar, it would making it have a good full sound.

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