Peace of Mind

LWinston

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Well...I managed to overcome a serious case of creative block. This is a cool smoother track. It came after alot of creative frustration. It's a bit different from what I normally make (I think), but it was in me, so now I give you a piece of my mind. P.S. The eye belongs to my cat, Scrappy. He's one of the most peaceful guys I know. I hope you like the track. If you have the time, please comment. I need the feedback to help me evolve.

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Hits: 1607
Comments: 5
Fans: 2
Plays: 68
Downloads: 113
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Nov 07, 2005 - 06:25:09 AM
Last Updated: Nov 07, 2005 - 01:20:47 PM Last Played: Sep 08, 2011 - 07:17:02 AM

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Ghost -05	Ghost -05 said 2782 days ago (November 7th, 2005)
	Whats up L Very cool L . I enjoyed this it has a nice funky jazzy feel . Check out my latest song called Training

djteks

djteks said 2781 days ago (November 8th, 2005)

Keep the Echoes
I like the effects/ noises of echoes you added at the end. When I was first making music I always thought that extra unneeded "junk" like that was completely unnecessary. I've come to realize though, that sometimes more is more. Maybe try bringing in those kinds of sounds earlier in the piece, it was my favorite part. It gave the song a more varied texture.

Check out my latest song called Know Thyself

syzygywell	syzygywell said 2778 days ago (November 10th, 2005)
	dubby jazz you know the only thing I could say about this song is that it could use a mild bit of variance. I actually don't mind repetition on a great groove. however some change in tempo round mid section and maybe some sampled vocals that are heavily treated could give this a polished feel. otherwise awesome groove. Check out my latest song called only when you sleep (can you find home)

nealgardner

nealgardner said 2774 days ago (November 15th, 2005)

a bit repetitive; needs more percussion
it's a decent sketch, but needs a lot of work.
-different drum tracks: try experimenting with multi-layered drums.
-more breaks
-throw some melody on top of the chord progression.

what you have is one, long "A" section. you need a "B" section (at least).
try mapping your arrangement. for example:
8 measures: intro
8 meas.: A section
4 meas: break
8 meas: B sect.

you get the idea...

now, get back to work; you've got a potentially great track in your hands!!

Check out my latest song called Love Theme From Cannibal Massacre

plopes	plopes said 2743 days ago (December 15th, 2005)
	filter love I dig that automatic Filter? over the main melody. Well done. Thanks for the cool tracks. I have little musical experience but wanted to share my comments with you regardless. Praise God. Check out my latest song called Silent Night

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Artist Info

Name: LWinston
Location: Manhattan NY USA

While Garageband enables and challenges me to come up with competent tracks, I never forget how far from a real musician I really am. It would be cool to become the world's most successful "Loop Artist." I believe that it's quite amazing when I can... [see more]

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Electronic dance music is a broad set of percussive music genres that largely inherit from 1970s disco music and, to some extent, the experimental pop music of Kraftwerk. Such music was originally borne of and popularized via regional nightclub scene

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