The audience and arena feeling is clever done. Did you play this stuff yourself, both drums and guitars or..?

Diggin' the guitar work! Got a little surpriced by that jazzy guitar at the end:)

Do I hear a double kickdrum?

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Cool ideas and nice beats, but the flow could've been better. It's more like
3 short individual songs than one whole song.
Don't get me wrong - each idea is very good on its own, they just don't
blend together all that well.
The overall sound of the rockin' parts - especially the one in the middle -
was also a bit hollow. Perhaps a trip to the equalizer could fix that one
right up.
But all in all - pretty cool.
Good job!

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All guitars played my me, the fisrt drum section is a garageband loop, the
other drums are all midi written by me. And yes, you hear DOUBLEKICK!!!

I completly get what your saying about not blending, as it is actually 2
seperate riffs recorded on two seperate occasions put together so I could
hand something in for Audio Design! So I just chucked in that weird
sound effect and a diminished tapping thing on guitar to blend it...

And the jazzy thing at the end was intended to suprise :)

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I like surprises in music. This is not the type of music I normally listen to
but I think you did a great job on it!

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The riff! Throw some bass on the pup! Everything else sounds cool! Bring the drums up in the mix! I love it! METAL RULES! The last jazz part is totally a different song! Try to flow it a little better and create a different song out of the jazz part!

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Ha yeah I do need some bass, I don't have access to one at the moment.
I have holidays soon, so I'll re-post this song with a much better mix.
Thanks for commenting!

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fairly repetitive at the begging. Although the change is appreciated and adds interest, it comes without any warning shifts immediately to another main riff. Although this is good for shock value sometimes, i think here the song would be better served with a better flow. I like the bass line at the end, it just needs to be a little louder. It fades out towards the tops of the riff sometimes.

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I really dig these riffs. I too would like to hear some bass added to thicken this out. Also, the drumming is good, but low in the mix and seems to be almost entirely in my right ear during the second movement. The jazzy last part is nice, but it might drive the headbangers out of the crowd :) There's great rocking parts in here that deserve to be mixed around into a more song-like structure.

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i like the guitar. sounds pretty good.

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nice riffs, it does have some flow issues. but a great start/ as you said it's not done, but this could become a great piece if you give it time. i think you could find a way to throw in a jazz ending that might fit a little better.

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