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Yes a rough day indeed. Just a little thank-you to someone special who was there for me. (My first song with my guitar. Please keep in mind I've only been playing for four months. I'm also taking lessons.) Enjoy.
Lyrics:
Luckiest Girl – November 3, 2005
I had a rough day
I won’t say why
I am so thankful
You were there by my side
If it weren’t for you
I don’t know where I’d be
I’d stay out all day
To never face reality
Cause I’m lost in this place
Oh I’m too scared to show my face
Everything’s going to be ok
Tonight. Tonight
You came here with me
Made me feel alright
I don’t know how you do it
I don’t know why
I just know I’m the luckiest girl alive
When that door closed
A million more opened
So much to say
Before a word has been spoken
There’s no telling
what will be will be
We all just have
To wait and see
I can’t believe I held on so long
Everyday felt like it was so wrong
I know I didn’t belong
I couldn’t go on
Hardware:
Simon and Patrick Acoustic Guitar
Software:
GarageBand
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Luck... &mdash 11/08/05 - 12:27:37 PM
What a beautiful song you have created. Your vocals sound to be
coming from a very relaxed and comfortable place... Maybe this is
partially a reflection of the space that you are writing about... Maybe,
but more likely, it is that you are talented and you have been gifted a
beautiful and charming voice. As well, you have written a wonderful
song that has nice lyrics of which are quite accessible... Maybe, if
you're lucky...
Dion [ Reply to This ]
Nice &mdash 11/08/05 - 01:20:06 PM
Good quality, and very well done, your voice certainly is good, and the
guitar is nice and subtle within the song. I like this well done, expect
some more. Cheers [ Reply to This ]
Nice &mdash 11/08/05 - 01:20:08 PM
Good quality, and very well done, your voice certainly is good, and the
guitar is nice and subtle within the song. I like this well done, expect
some more. Cheers [ Reply to This ]
good &mdash 11/10/05 - 11:17:27 AM
nice, better then my first songs, and if not my current songs. good voice. you know how to sing. it sounds a little weird with the low harmonizing. [ Reply to This ]
Lovely song &mdash 11/11/05 - 07:25:15 AM
You do have a very nice voice and you know how to use it! The
harmonies are lovely. You're doing very well with that guitar too ... I
wouldn't have guessed you'd only been playing for a few months.
You're sounding pretty confident on it already. Keep at it! I look
forward to hearing more. [ Reply to This ]
Very Good Singing &mdash 11/13/05 - 05:32:03 AM
nice work &mdash 11/15/05 - 03:42:47 AM
your voice excellent. and not only that, you produced it really well.
whatever you did in production, like the eq, compression, reverb, and
other things, DO THAT from now on. i can hear the emotion in your
voice, you really believed in the message you were singing as you were
recording. most people cant capture that.
if i were working on this song, i would add some more compression
and maybe a touch of reverb to the guitar, just to fill out the sound a
little more. oh, and make sure your guitar is tuned really well when you
record, it makes the whole thing sound a lot better.
nice work. if you can consistantly write like this, keep writing. you'll
build a really good body of work. [ Reply to This ]
Very nice. &mdash 11/15/05 - 10:51:13 PM
I Like This &mdash 12/21/05 - 09:49:08 AM
Nice simple and effective song. I like your voice and the way you harmonized with yourself. The acoustic guitra part you play is simple but very effective. You sound like you have been playing for more then four monts. [ Reply to This ]
Nice singing... &mdash 01/24/06 - 11:11:24 PM
Very well done &mdash 02/05/06 - 11:01:32 PM
Great part of the song where it gets into
Everything%u2019s going to be ok
Tonight. Tonight
However, I think to support that section..... this song should have the tempo increased several steps, and should be more of a pop song than an acousitc song.
Very well done though. [ Reply to This ]
Acoustic &mdash 02/08/06 - 11:12:31 AM
My favorite thing is an acoustic guitar and a voice and you have got it! My
only concern is that your guitar seems to be a little out of tune. Not
hugely so, but enough for it to be disconcerting. If you can't hear it
yourself, you should invest in a tuner. It's worth it.
Great vocals again, keep up the good work with your guitar as well! You
seem to be a natural. [ Reply to This ]
cool &mdash 11/29/06 - 02:35:52 PM
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coming from a very relaxed and comfortable place... Maybe this is
partially a reflection of the space that you are writing about... Maybe,
but more likely, it is that you are talented and you have been gifted a
beautiful and charming voice. As well, you have written a wonderful
song that has nice lyrics of which are quite accessible... Maybe, if
you're lucky...
Dion
[ Reply to This ]