Nicely done vocal, excellent backup vocal work, solid instrumentation
and studio production.
About the only thing I found lacking in this performance was a more
dynamic portion, where the soulfulness suggested in this ballad was
given wings and allowed to fly.
The likely spot, seemed to me, to be near the end --- where an
instrumental stop and then a half-step modulation upwards could
provide ample opportunity to *pump it up* both vocally and
instrumentally.
I believe that could help infuse this piece with a stronger *spiritual*
feel and make it more powerful... and compelling. ;-)
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