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Just a simple little ode to an older women who embodies everything you could possibly want. But because of factors such as age, children and marriage is beyond any touch I could give.
Finished the song in less than an hour and didn't use any auto-correction on vocals, so it sounds kinda rough. But that's why I like it.
Finished the song in less than an hour and didn't use any auto-correction on vocals, so it sounds kinda rough. But that's why I like it.
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Lyrics
She is too old for me to undress.
But I know, she is the one I confess.
And she is too young to give in to trust.
Cause I know, I'm the darker side of human touch
But I know, she is the one I confess.
And she is too young to give in to trust.
Cause I know, I'm the darker side of human touch
Peter Greenstone
I really like that chord progression and the simplicity. Strong presence in
your vocals that sounds very nice. The lyrics are like a short poem. I
think you could develope this further but it works well as a simple and
short piece. It would be nice if the guitar was a little cleaner (less of the
humm and scratches) but it is generally a nice tone and effect you
selected. I enjoyed this.