this sounds like 3 seperate ideas thrown together. it started out with a nice heavy guitar part, and then the clean part through me off and then the added drum part right at the end. i liked the first two parts, but perhaps they should be seperated to different projects or better put together in the song. i think drums are in order, and some vocals. the electric guitar in the beggining was very good. and is the beggining of a great song.

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I really like both songs (or sketches, I'd say) you've posted, but they're just very good ideas which I'd like to see properly developed...

I'll keep an eye on you, definitely... :)

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They're not ideas or songs. This is just several different standard guitar
loops placed one after the other in the most utterly unimaginative way
possible. Give me a friggin' break.

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It appears as though you have placed a loop, placed another one,
placed another one, and then submitted what you have as a song...

Such a process does not honor your own creativity, to which you
certainly have access, but which takes much more work than that to
develop. Nor does it honor the site on which you submitted this.

In deference to both your creativity and the integrity of the site, may I
suggest that you increase the effort you put into making music ten-
fold, listen with a critical ear to what you create, and work on the
aspects that you find need work, and then prepare to be dazzled by the
results.

There is no doubt in my mind you can do better than this.

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thanks for the critique.. next time ill try to do better :)

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