The first part sounds pretty good - nice little string melody with some
pretty cool guitar lines on top. Can't say the drum beat really appealed
to me.

Onto the second part. Nice transition, very smooth. More of that guitar.
Very smooth and soft sound. Nice bassline, but stands out a little too
much at places.

Ends a bit suddenly, for my taste.

Overall a very smooth track. Could use a little more buildup and
change of dynamics, but that smooth, soft feeling really shines
through the piece. (Perhaps more of a blues track?)
Nice work.

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There are some really nice parts in this and parts that are a little to
amorphus for me. I agree with Einarus that the drum track is wrong for
this. There are moments when this sounds quite beautiful and
interesting. I'd say keep working on it, particularly the percussion. It
could turn out to be a great track. I wouldn't call it progressive/Art rock
so much. It's one of those hard to place ones. Dunno.

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I kind of got stuck with this one, thats why its so cool to have macjams. :)

Thansk for the feedback. I�ll try to make it better, just needs a break from
my head..... :)

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