Well I must say, it's better than the Irish Song. I enjoyed it, how about some lyrics? You should do lyrics, otherwise it's just one git-box solo. i don't like songs that are just one big face-melter, but that wasn't even a face-melter.
In all - good, but you need lyrics and some bass or something.

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much, much better sir - i would cosider the words of FSVC - they are
all valid. - it' great that you keep getting so much better at this and
within a short period of time as of recent. you can tell that you've been
practicing.

nice work!

cydniko

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I really appriciate the comments

DOS

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You show that very well in this one. Your stuff is rapidly improving, man.
This was actually quite enjoyable.
I agree with the previous commentators. This could really use something
more to spice it up a bit.
Nice work.

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as stated lyrics would be nice, if you don't have any, i can give you some. i can probably find a good song i have written, or even a poem that can be transformed into a song, vocals would add nicely though.

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I think i can make some lyrics...I mostly write about whats going on in my life and now...its not going so well.

DOS

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Hey, the best lyrics come from when you are down in the dumps. Even
Shakespeare's most successful works were tragedies.

I did really enjoy this song. Your timing has much improved and you
seem to have an intuitive sense for using chord variations to create
color in your music. This has nice rhthmic variation as well, varying
between strumming and picking and repeating passages. You should
be particularly proud of this one.

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quite nicely.

Your best to date, I think.

Sounds like you may have been listening to a bit of Mozart.

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