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I still have no mic, but this is pretty clear. Enjoy!
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| aclarke said 1460 days ago (November 23rd, 2005) | |
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good song but a mic and better recording set up could do wonders with this. There's no question you have the talent- great voice and strong guitar. Even without the mic this could be improved a lot with better mixing. Everything seems to be occupying the same space... I'd start with some seperation...rhythm guitars panned a little left, lead right, vox centered, etc. Play around with it until you can hear the difference. One other technique you might try is to double the vocal track- this will help bring it forward in the mix and give it a fuller sound. You may also want to try some EQ on the drums... can't help much there beyond that though. As I said, this is a really good song that can easily be improved by remixing. Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki
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| Emily Rohm said 1460 days ago (November 23rd, 2005) | |
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Definitely talented! You are really great at putting together a complete song. I recall giving you all 10s on one of your songs. This one is great, too, although could be better quality, of course. You have a good voice and I would love to hear every detail in your delivery. I know how it is not having a mic... Great job regardless! Check out my latest song called Monica's Waltz
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| ReneJaenke said 1458 days ago (November 25th, 2005) | |
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Cool! This a cool Song with lot expression. But you need a mike! Nice guitars! Check out my latest song called Sunset
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| dented said 1454 days ago (November 29th, 2005) | |
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Cool! Thanks for the kind words everybody. I did finally purchase a microphone, so my new songs will be much better on the production end of things. Ouch, my song went from an 8.00 to a 6.5 - I guess this means I suck. Check out my latest song called Lost
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| nyakki said 1453 days ago (November 30th, 2005) | |
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Nice Tune Since aclarke gave good advice on how to bring this tune out technically, I'll go with the emotional stuff. The lack of mic didn't hurt this tune at all. If you didn't mention it above, I wouldn't have known (note: don't put negatives in people's heads before the song - I almost didn't listen because of that comment) Personal preference would have liked to hear some harmony and/or some backup singing (done by you, of course). The song cuts off abruptly, as well. I don't know if that was intentional (which I hope it wasn't) or a file thing. Would like to hear it echo a bit more at the end. Overall - Very cool. I would have downloaded if it wasn't for that abrupt ending. Get that fixed so I can add this song to my collection. ;-) Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2
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| dented said 1453 days ago (November 30th, 2005) | |
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Nice Tune Thanks for the advice! Check out my latest song called Lost
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| Joshosh said 1446 days ago (December 7th, 2005) | |
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I'm Actually Surprised That the vocals are this clear using the pinhole mic. Your guitar playing is just nasty dude. Really clean, great control and nice mixture of guitar sounds. Your voice is strong, did you not sing at all with your former band? Nice tune man. Check out my latest song called These Few Words
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| dented said 1446 days ago (December 7th, 2005) | |
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I'm Actually Surprised Hell no Josh, I never sung outside of my little guitar studio area at home. Well, except here now... Now, if I had your voice... Check out my latest song called Lost
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| selters said 1445 days ago (December 8th, 2005) | |
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Sounds a bit like opeth This is really nice. reminded me a little of "to bid you farewell" by Opeth. Very nice! I really like it when it gets a little more heavy sound at the end!! Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)
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Good song and good voice, not bad for no mic either. I've heard worse from people with mics. Cheers!!!!