The music kept my attention until the end.

A good published first attempt.

Welcome to MacJams.

R.

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Good creativity in your use of the various loops that are available. Seems
as though you enjoy using the orchestral string sounds... Try recording
some actual string players live....make loops out of what you record and
have at it.

You may surprised at what you're able to create.

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I like your choice of loops. I don't normally listen to songs in this
genre, but this is pretty cool. I like the orchestral sounds. Very nice.

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as Emily commented I do like your choice of the orchestral sounds, gives it quite some originality. Most industrial is almost all synthesis. as you can tell I'm not real versed in this type of music. When I try to do this kind of stuff I get lost and would rather get lost in someon elses composition. I like the mean organ later in the tune...caught me off guard just a bit. how do you keep track?

Thanks for sharing
John

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you all guys for your nice comments.

to SOPMAN99 : i doubt i `ll be able to record real live violin
players.maybe when im good enough with my brand new violin and
after few lessons i can loop myself ahah :-)

to EMILY : i liked the violins loops so much and some of those trance
beats too that was almost automatic for me to put them togheter. I
went and listened to your singing: you are splendid!!! for that xmas
song i think it is best if you sing it! ;-)

to TEXASFEEL : i`m glad you appreciated the end result of my loopy
song. i dont undertand what you mean with " keeping track"? if you
mean it litterally..yes...lots of tracks in this song and i almost got lost
too eheh.....( i love country music! i love Dolly Parton and Randy
Travis!)

i`ll go listen to more of all your music, guys!

~peace~

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Feel fine, this is harmony.
Very Good Work.

I Love it.
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*Skean*
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Really cool combination of trance background and violins at first. The samples are powerfull. Ah there's a nice acid line (Listening while writing). Nice variations, it doesn't really sound like trance, more experimental. Drums sounds good to. The music really keeps you busy. Can't really think of any tips. Maybe a more interesting start.. Really like this track. Keep up the great work

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Welcome to MacJams! I loved the various sound effects you've used in
this piece. Also worth mentioning is the mixing; it is done very well. There
is a nice balance between all of your instruments. I look forward to seeing
(or rather hearing) how your music evolves.

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