Can't make out the words. The keys are pretty and
thoughtful. Sounds like the words are as well but I can't
make out what they are. Dunno if I'd add anything to the
solo piano on the front and back end but perhaps strings
and percussion when you step it up in the middle section.

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I redid this one to make the lyrics clearer. Here they are since I didn't put them in when I put in the song:

Empty box of moonlight, I'm riding on your beams, through the dark and stormy night, huddled in my dreams.

My teddy close to guard me, his plush a mighty shield, no nightmare can break through this time, my mystic peacful sleep.

Sunlight through the window, shining on my face, I wake to find the morning holding me in its warm embrace. Hello and welcome teddy, I hope you slept ok, Its time to get my motor running, and face this brand new day.

Nights again upon us, the moon and stars in check, I tuck my teddy in nice and tight, and give him a little peck. What does tomorrow hold, I guess I'll soon find out. Right now its time to get some sleep, I close my eyes and fall in deep, my worries all in doubt.

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Belt out those lyrics! You can do it. Your voice sounds like Rufus Wainright's "Hallelujah" from the Shrek 1 soundtrack. Nice song!

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i would'nt add anything else to the piece...the piano and
voice rule .....and yeah up the vol on the voice maybe a
tad reverb and a slight pinch of chorus..(on the
voice)...hehhehhh

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You have a break in there with the piano that was very
emotional. You seem to have quite a talent for melodic
popular piano for sure. I just love that part of it especially
the break. Really really nice.

Bill
thetiler

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