A little disjointed perhaps. I have the same problem. I think ' tears for
easrs' syndrome. Are you trying too hard? Don't wish to be negative
there is a real good beat & rythymn in there. The end is too abrupt even
by my standards. i have done it too, I have had a few harsh comments,
but it has great promise, please go back, relax & take your time to create
what I think is a great song. Hope I have given you encouragement.
Cheers have fun, go in-peace. steve
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easrs' syndrome. Are you trying too hard? Don't wish to be negative
there is a real good beat & rythymn in there. The end is too abrupt even
by my standards. i have done it too, I have had a few harsh comments,
but it has great promise, please go back, relax & take your time to create
what I think is a great song. Hope I have given you encouragement.
Cheers have fun, go in-peace. steve
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