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Keywords:
pop (449), mistakes (7), light (98), josh (8), rock (1083), harmony (53)
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Description:
My band and I had a blast writing and playing this song. I hope you like it.
Lyrics:
My vision is blurry
This is not making sense
My mind is burning
A million thoughts in my head
And not one I can comprehend
And not one I can comprehend
And what am I to you?
And what do you want me to be?
And what are you saying?
It's not too good to me, oh no.
It's not too good to me, oh no.
Wondering why, you take it for granted
And why, you can't talk to me
It's one of my many mistakes.
And what should I do now?
And what should I do now to take away this pain?
And what am I too you?
And what do you want me to be?
And what are you saying?
It's not too good to me oh no.
It's not too good to me, oh no.
Walking in circles and you can't find me.
Through all these obstaacles, never free.
And what am I to you?
And what do you want me to be?
And what are you saying?
It's not too good to me, oh no.
It's not too good to me, oh no.
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Nice song. &mdash 12/12/05 - 12:59:55 PM
I enjoyed it a lot, nice job on it. The band sounds great. The recording,
while not bad, could be a little better, but it could just be my speakers. [ Reply to This ]
Another great song &mdash 12/12/05 - 09:50:29 PM
I can tell you and your band are tight and have a great sound. I like your edgier stuff better, but that's just my tastes.
This song reminds me alot of Hootie and The Blowfish, and that's a compliment, considering they owned the pop charts for like 2 years. Maybe it's just the chords being used on guitar.
I think what I like about your music so much is how you utilize a second vocal track, your background vocals are always there for a reason, not just for filling space.
Once again Josh, you rock. [ Reply to This ]
Another great song &mdash 12/13/05 - 12:14:57 AM
Thanks dude. I tried to email you about that breathless collab...you still down?
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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler
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Another great song &mdash 12/13/05 - 08:08:11 AM
Tight &mdash 12/13/05 - 06:49:24 PM
Sound like you and your band are pretty tight. Pretty good pop song,
good energy. You might want to experiment with moving your bridge
until just after the solo and having the back-to-back chorus repeats
going into the fade out. It sounds a little out of place where it is, but that
might just be me. Also, bring up the vocals just a hair in the mix, they are
a little down in the mix, especially in the beginning. Other than that, the
vocals sound very good. It's a good solid tune and it sounds like you have
a good band. Off to listen to some more of your stuff. [ Reply to This ]
Tight &mdash 12/13/05 - 10:40:22 PM
Great suggestions. I will pass them along to the boys. Thank you!
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Life beats down and crushes the soul and art reminds you that you have one.
—Stella Adler
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Awsome! &mdash 12/22/05 - 11:04:02 PM
VOICE &mdash 01/16/06 - 04:19:34 PM
your voice is beautiful on this track. the words are a little hard to hear. this is rather well produced over all though, probably the best of your tracks i've listened to. i think ill add this to my ipod next to your other tracks :) you keep getting better. i really like your voice on this one! [ Reply to This ]
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while not bad, could be a little better, but it could just be my speakers.
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