nice song


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they also don't have a goth genre which is sad. try adding more layers around the beggining so far all im hearing is a repetitive drumbeat. once the other sounds come in it's pretty cool but too long of just drums a good intro ammount is 4 measures. seems once it changes it gets pretty good. the piece is seeming a little long, if you shorten the intro that will help. you said it was your first song using gb so all and all it's a great first attempt. i've never used gb. but have some songs using loops on my page.

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thanks for being so polite! It is WAY too long! I will revisit this track as I feel I
could have fun rebuilding it.

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Andrew Merlino

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it's a good track to work with. i find that 6 minutes is about as long as i can take in a song. and often times i can't do that, but then im used to short fast song. this site has alot of nice polite people, i wish people were like that on other sites as well.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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i like the clicking sounds that go with the drumbeat. it is a bit repetitive but you did say you need to go and finish it. i would kick in the instrumentation earlier in the songs, too much just plain drums for me. maybe add some changes to the drums earlier in the song as well. there was one or two nice breaks. it seems like once it comes in with instrumentation it's pretty good. i like your percussion style that you use.

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the more often you hear it the better you can feel it

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thanks for that, thats the problem we all have listening to our tracks until we
can't hear them anymore! Minimalist is what I love best, buts its the hardest
thing to do well! Someday I will finish it... it may be even more minimalist
though! . . . . . . ..

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Andrew Merlino

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Buscemi and YOU =)


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