This is a pleasant listen. A couple of observations, one - perhaps work with a metronome to tighten your grooves. I like how the tempo changed during the mono bits, but it's a little distracting when you've got two tracks moving at different speeds. Otherwise - sounds good. Capo on!

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it has potential. once i get decent headphones ill add the vocals. that shouldn't take too long, since the progression is fairly simple. but ill have to get some lyrics for it. if you could email me the mp3 that'd be awsome because it doesnt work when i download it.

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This is a deep track and it doesn't neccessarily
require lyrics. Today too many lyrical additives
can ruin a track when the simple instrumental is
even more pleasing. I'm not dissing your band's
vocals or anything but I just think it's cool the way it
is. I might add a light flange to it though.
(but that's just me)

peace out

Jack Betz

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