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Traffic Light Destruction- Ashes Arise Feat. DOS by DOS [Email]
Genre: Hardcore

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Last Played: May 14, 2008 - 01:42:56 PM
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Uploaded: Dec 19, 2005 - 05:47:38 PM
Last Updated: Dec 19, 2005 - 01:52:16 PM
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Description:
Another Song I did my vocals with Ashes Arise. Hope you like it.

Lyrics:
Meddling with dangerous objects is bad for your health.
Determination will bring out the wrong in yourself.
Your fears and your lies will get you nowhere.
When your day of death becomes, dont dispair.
Your soul fallen angel will be home soon.
And when the keepers ask, tell them that I sent you.

Falling from my own abyss
I see your corpse
Lying on the ground
And I start to grin.
I feel like i'm nothing,
nothing i'm suppose to be.
I look at my life,
and decide to quit.

So stay away, away from me.
I don't need your sympathy.
Save me from, a horrible death.
I'd rather die, then take your shit.

And when you feel like you're gettin too strong,
release your anger and it will be gone.
Bow down on your knees, and worship your new king.
Bow down on your knees, and worship your new king.
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Too Hot! &mdash 12/19/05 - 07:56:32 PM
First, I dig what you're going for - but the levels here are all over the map, so it's really hard to get into the track. The drums and guitar/bass could come up, the vocals are panned nicely, but they're peaking and could use some leveling out. Spend some time on the mix and work on microphone technique, it'll make supervising your mix much easier. Rock on!

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On another note &mdash 12/19/05 - 07:57:43 PM
The lyrics are killer. Thought I'd share.

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Thanks &mdash 12/20/05 - 07:44:43 PM
Thanks for the comment man.

DOS

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nice style. &mdash 12/21/05 - 03:32:13 PM
i like the style the instrumentals could be brought up. the screaming could be more strong. it kinda goes off into a sound as if it's not screamed but when you pretend to scream so that you aren't to loud. be full out, let it rip. i should do some stuff like this, it's what i live for but my band fell apart so i've only been doing normal accoustic stuff.

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Be Careful &mdash 01/02/06 - 05:44:10 AM
You may hurt your voice!
Interesting work here. Lo-fi works fine with hardcore (but I'm very old
school and am used to hearing things like this from 2nd and third
generation mono cassette sources) - I guess what matters most is - are
you happy with the mix? I like the drumming here especially.

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good start &mdash 01/02/06 - 04:30:44 PM
I like the drums as well---talented double-kick rolls in there. The
vocals need some balancing I think.

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well. &mdash 01/28/06 - 11:30:27 AM
i'm always a sucker for hardcore.
i like this one.
maybe slightly cliche lyrics,but that happens a lot with hardcore/screamo
stuff.
i like the drum part a lot though.

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the shredder &mdash 03/15/07 - 03:58:29 PM
thundering together in complex sonic overlays, lightspeed drumming and roaring umbrage of vocal torment. Nihilism and misanthropic despair through composition. very cool track



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