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This is a prog rock song I originally made as a joke but I started getting creative.
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Lyrics
Flash back some-thousand years
Time just was dust
I talked to a statue
It's head was made of rust
I met a girl
Her name was Vesuvius
Thousands of years ago
Frozen in time
There was a mighty volcano
And she was all mine
One day we had a fight
I lost her trust
She had a debt to pay
It's name was Vesuvius!
Time just was dust
I talked to a statue
It's head was made of rust
I met a girl
Her name was Vesuvius
Thousands of years ago
Frozen in time
There was a mighty volcano
And she was all mine
One day we had a fight
I lost her trust
She had a debt to pay
It's name was Vesuvius!
Warren Smith
I seem to work just the opposite - my work starts out creatively, but usually turns into a joke.
You show lots of innovation in developing the original idea here, coming up with a grand series of progressions. So even if it started off as a joke, it certainly becomes more serious along the way. But how it starts doesn't really matter, as long as you find an insertion point to get your creative juices going. I think this piece has more potential - that you could develop it further, perhaps by adding more instruments. Or more words. However, I couldn't understand the single verse - it would be helpful if you posted the lyrics.