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This song is about demons and self-defeat and the world that we create for ourselves. I really enjoyed creatiing this one, I think the sound of it is the most successful for me with garageband so far.
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Lyrics
down on me
the haunting burdens that I breath across my life
for thirteen dollars tried some peace through a sharp knife
the shattered pieces all around me
down on me
the toxic dressings of these wounds that I have made
the broken back from placing stones upon my grave
I load the weight that falls down upon me
It's a mad world, oh that I seek
these habits that I feed
It's a mad world, oh that I own
paid my flesh and bone
Down on me
hallunications of the ghosts that hold me back
the broken tunge I tie at all that I do lack
I let it all down on me
Down on me
let it rain on me
let it burn around me
as long as I am free
let it fall down on me
the haunting burdens that I breath across my life
for thirteen dollars tried some peace through a sharp knife
the shattered pieces all around me
down on me
the toxic dressings of these wounds that I have made
the broken back from placing stones upon my grave
I load the weight that falls down upon me
It's a mad world, oh that I seek
these habits that I feed
It's a mad world, oh that I own
paid my flesh and bone
Down on me
hallunications of the ghosts that hold me back
the broken tunge I tie at all that I do lack
I let it all down on me
Down on me
let it rain on me
let it burn around me
as long as I am free
let it fall down on me
dreadmon
This is a wicked great tune and I immediately fell into it! There's a sort of Lennon-esque quality to it, dreamy-yet-dark. Your voice is just wonderful, the harmonies, both parallel and backing, are superb. Production is top-notch. IlLove the line "broken back from placing stones upon my grave." This is a great subject and you handle it with a quiet, reserved intensity that really fits well with the overall mood. My one critique involves the bridges ("it's a mad world") - to my ears, they don't resound melodically like the rest of the song does. The chord changes and harmonies are killer, but the melody, to me, seems unresolved, and your vocals don't sound as sure-footed here as they do throughout the piece, where every note seems woven into the fabric. The bridge is a kvetch, because this tune really knocks my socks off! Keep up the excellent work.
D/L 8-8-8-8